Notes About The Poem

September

Summer touches its end,
           the daylight fades out
       with the children's happyness
            playing in the park.
      
         Sad trees with empty nests,
         abandoned by their guests, 
      in the search of the long days,
        to discover new happy trees, 
          covered with green leaves.
      
         New adventures to find out,
               places to conquer 
                or to come back 
                to keep feeding 
           the same candle alive.
             
            September month,
                   a half way 
      between light and darkness,
         between sun and clouds,
              joy and sadness.
          Semptember month,
           facing big changes
     mixed with different feelings.
        
           Ends and beginnings
          meet in a cool month,
     a good time for new diggings
     inside of our own September
            being here or there,
               being the same
                   or change.
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Anaya Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Maria, you've described that feeling of abandoned so well. When there are less spirits in an in-between month like September. An uplifting ending. I enjoyed very much. I Am Anaya
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Thank you so much, Anaya. Glad you enjoyedxxx
Stark Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 1:07 AM
September couldn't have been more beautiful Such a nice poem
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:37 AM
Hello Curie, thanks for your nice comment. I'm glad you liked it. Have a nice day
Kaufman Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Hi Maria, I loved the way your imagery and contrast developed with your September piece here. It was so well crafted.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:16 PM
Hi Nancy. Thank you. I appreciate your comment and I' m glad you liked it.
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