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Summer touches its end, the daylight fades out with the children's happyness playing in the park. Sad trees with empty nests, abandoned by their guests, in the search of the long days, to discover new happy trees, covered with green leaves. New adventures to find out, places to conquer or to come back to keep feeding the same candle alive. September month, a half way between light and darkness, between sun and clouds, joy and sadness. Semptember month, facing big changes mixed with different feelings. Ends and beginnings meet in a cool month, a good time for new diggings inside of our own September being here or there, being the same or change.

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Date: 9/10/2023 9:51:00 AM
Maria, you've described that feeling of abandoned so well. When there are less spirits in an in-between month like September. An uplifting ending. I enjoyed very much. I Am Anaya
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/10/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anaya. Glad you enjoyedxxx
Date: 9/9/2023 1:07:00 AM
September couldn't have been more beautiful Such a nice poem
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/9/2023 2:37:00 AM
Hello Curie, thanks for your nice comment. I'm glad you liked it. Have a nice day
Date: 8/29/2023 2:34:00 PM
Hi Maria, I loved the way your imagery and contrast developed with your September piece here. It was so well crafted.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/29/2023 3:16:00 PM
Hi Nancy. Thank you. I appreciate your comment and I' m glad you liked it.

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