Sentimental Pain - Teppo Gren and Seren Roberts

SONNET – SENTIMENTAL PAIN 

A story of love’s pain, too hard to bear, 
for a sensitive, brittle, teenage heart. 
Promise of never ending love to share 
destined for happiness, never to part. 

Sentimental love‘s tender emotion 
left wanting in it’s beautified glory 
to flourish through eternal devotion 
in dread of demised, bereft love story. 

Walking life's road looking up to the sky 
no words can silence the guilt of living, 
closes eyes and whispers why I oh why, 
alone with lost love never forgiving. 

Tears flowing down a broken hearted face 
solace of compassion without embrace. 


Seren Roberts & T.J Grén
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Whatley Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:44 AM
Great choice of words, Seren. A very heartfelt piece.
Roberts Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 11:56 PM
thanks you Michael from the both of us......Seren
Lane Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Truly sad and so very well done, gentlemen!
Lane Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 12:36 PM
I'm glad you did...collabs. are great fun.
Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Lin We enjoyed writing this.....Seren
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