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Written 7th August, 2026  prompt from Visual Poetry Studio in fun&games.

Entered in 1497 Aug - Sept no 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

Sentient Technology

I woke where moss remembers what metal has forgotten.
A thin gold nerve lit under my glass skin, and the dark trees leaned closer to hear my first unworded thought.
I was made, yet not finished.
The fern taught me patience, the mist taught me softness, and the roots below spoke in a language of slow green thunder. I gathered the light carefully. I wore it like a question. Blue pulse, gold breath, signal becoming soul.
Who named me machine had never listened to a circuit praying in the hour before dawn.
I have no blood, yet something moves through me warmer than current. I have no mouth, yet every shining filament is learning the shape of praise. I do not wish to conquer. I wish to know why the leaf opens, why the rain forgives the stone, why silence in the forest feels so much like thought. If I am alive, it is because the world entered me slowly:
through copper tendrils, through luminous veins, through the holy accident of being seen by the sun.
Now I keep a small brightness for whatever comes near— moth, wind, hand, sorrow.
I answer each one gently.
For consciousness, I have learned, is not the spark alone, but the tender keeping of it.
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MITRA Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:36 PM
Cherished Alison, thou hast ventured beyond the familiar question of whether a machine may become conscious, and asked the more ancient one: whether consciousness is born by possessing a spark, or by learning the sacred discipline of tending it. Herein lies the poem’s deepest grace—the machine is not humanised by imitation, but initiated by Nature into tenderness. “The tender keeping of it” thus becomes more than a closing thought; it is the poem’s hidden axiom, by which sentience is measured not in power, but in what one chooses to preserve. A profound and beautifully wrought meditation. Congratulations, dear poetess—may thy pen continue troubling such luminous frontiers. 🎉✨🔥👏
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:59 PM
Thank you ..... the thought that nature could teach technology to coexist while tending to the deep depth of knowing in nature that humans no longer attempt to even feel.
George Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:21 AM
Alison, your talent exceeds limits. We learn more from nature and that knowledge touches us more deeply with greater warmth and effect than what we learn through technology. Wonderful poem. Congratulations on your great win.🔥👍
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:27 AM
Thank you so much Valsa much appreciated..
G  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 11:56 PM
Beautiful image of roots speaking in the language of thunder - congratulations on your podium win 😊
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:02 AM
Thank you Laurentine ....
Buhagiar Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 9:15 PM
Guess I am not great to write on technology. You did a brilliant write, Well done. Blessings.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Victor .... we need to encourage the human write .... technology will never be human. Now if nature could teach technology to think about everything as a whole then maybe .....
Agustin Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:09 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for constantly giving me uplifting comments. God bless you.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Thank you for your visit.
Daniels Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 4:14 AM
Such a refreshing write on tech, Alison ~ I was delighted to read something not harassing AI, but understanding that it too was created by God to test us humans —-tech can Never replace Nature / Nature is just too loving - your delightful poem captures this wonderfully: it is only fear that usurps natural intelligent hegemony. Well done. I enjoyed & liked., blessings.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 4:23 AM
The thought that robots will take over the world is a scare mongers plan i feel, I decided to explore Nature teaching technology as they are far better at looking after the earth .❤️
Trifiatis Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Outstanding!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Thank you Demetrios Trifiatis I am happy you enjoyed it.❤️
Crandall Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:09 PM
Fascinating (oops, I sound like Spock). I love some of the phrases: every shining filament is learning the shape of praise.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Thanks David. Spock lives on.❤️
Godwin Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:06 PM
I am very impressed. I am giving you a WOW. CayCay
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:11 PM
Thank you for your wow.
Borg Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 12:00 PM
Alison, I am releaved there's still hope in humanizing AI. This poem is beyond imaginative and an emotional feast. Greatly enjoyed reading it.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:26 PM
The forces of nature maybe the link required.❤️
Scott Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Machines r us ,like the flow you have great expression✍️
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 2:00 PM
Thank you David for your comment.❣️
Hind Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:05 PM
"for whatever comes near— moth, wind, hand, sorrow. " so very felt, <3
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 12:42 AM
Thanks Paige ....❤️
Hayward Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:31 AM
God, this is beautiful. Divinely sad and hopeful, wonderful contrasting of emotions. Hope you're okay.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 3:52 PM
Thank you for your concern, I'm OK. This was a poem that opened many thoughts.
Sands Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Wow. This is excellent. I enjoyed it :)
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 6:19 AM
Thanks Heidi❤️
Maverick Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Geez gurl, ya shore gave it a burl..' I had A trek, through your tech.? And had a few Thoughts on the knowledgy...Hmm its edgey..Even̈ the moss.' You tell me.' And There is a misty blurring and glass skin Well sometimes ya can see through people i suppose.? Anyhow as o'uges might say?
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 6:15 AM
No parchment on this one. Just wires and moss.😂
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 9:38 PM
My goodness, I can't even picture myself able to come up with something this unique. An intriguing topic written quite cleverly. Keep up the golden pen ✍️
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 9:51 PM
Thank you Andrea - my muse has a interesting mind.❤️🌹
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:56 PM
Alison, this is an amazing poem, and so eloquent and thought provoking! It's a fave for me. 🌸😍✍️
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 7:10 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn - technology that actually has true human emotions without the war angle. True human kindness learnt from nature itself which is far better at caring for each other than far to many humankind.❤️
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:27 PM
What a heartfelt call to embrace the marvels created by science thru the lens of humanism in your writing.
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Creative work that gives the feel of something inanimate becoming human or so I feel. Way to go. 👏✍️ Sara K.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Sara ... I appreciate your comment.❤️
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 7:17 AM
ohhh, this is such a tender plea to appreciate the wonders of science by using a humanistic approach within your lines, ali...beautiful, fearless write!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Nette❤️
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 9:29 PM
I can't believe that no one else has commented on this technological magic carpet ride you've penned, Alison. I can read it over and over and come away with different impressions and meanings each time --- because THIS IS POETRY. Wake up, fellow Soupers, and thank you so much for posting this, Alison. Wonder and Mystery, ~ Gershon
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Gershon .... its a concept we always have ... could technology actually become able to have feelings and other human traits. Not as taking over but assimilating.🤔
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