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I was strolling through the cosmos today, The universe was leading the way, And it took me directly to your door, And this is what it would say, It told me I’ll never have a choice, I will love you for ever more, It told me I will love all of who you are, That all of you I will adore, It told me that my heart is now yours, That you are now the one, That you are from the whole universe, The stars, the moon and the sun. I was strolling with spirits through the galaxy today, In the space that’s way up above, And I was sent right back to the front of your door, With a bucket full of crazy love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/31/2018 10:19:00 PM
Adorable love poem from a very interesting perspective. Well done, Lewis.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/4/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thank u for ur kind words Line, love is beautiful I think
Date: 1/31/2018 10:22:00 AM
Awh ... beautiful and sweet! Loved this Lewis!!! ~ Judy
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Judy, glad u liked this one :)
Date: 1/31/2018 6:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through the universe to the front door..the ending is nicely done.
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Date: 1/31/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Vijay :)
Date: 1/30/2018 11:58:00 PM
OH this is so awesome :)
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 1/31/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Maureen :)

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