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Sent From the Universe To You

I was strolling through the cosmos today, 
The universe was leading the way,
And it took me directly to your door, 
And this is what it would say,

It told me I’ll never have a choice, 
I will love you for ever more,
It told me I will love all of who you are, 
That all of you I will adore,

It told me that my heart is now yours, 
That you are now the one,
That you are from the whole universe, 
The stars, the moon and the sun.

I was strolling with spirits through the galaxy today, 
In the space that’s way up above,
And I was sent right back to the front of your door, 
With a bucket full of crazy love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Adorable love poem from a very interesting perspective. Well done, Lewis.
Raynes Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Thank u for ur kind words Line, love is beautiful I think
S     Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Awh ... beautiful and sweet! Loved this Lewis!!! ~ Judy
Raynes Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thanks Judy, glad u liked this one :)
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Enjoyed the journey through the universe to the front door..the ending is nicely done.
Raynes Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thanks Vijay :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:58 PM
OH this is so awesome :)
Raynes Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
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