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Cory was frequently, brutishly bashed For being a computer nerd unsurpassed. He dwelt on .org and .com And of being geek too long. Hence his grave was suitably marked .crashed.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/17/2015 7:42:00 AM

hahah that's funny!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

Thank you, Casarah. It's kind of you to comment. I appreciate it.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/17/2015 4:31:00 AM

lol - his epitaph could also read 'logged out of this life too early' lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/17/2015 10:14:00 PM

Jan, I like your version better. In fact, the limerick could use other revisions as well. I did, however, manage to keep the syllable count reasonably "decent."