Sensual Senses In a Tanka

Eyes for only you 
                      Cologne goaded me so much 
            My breath caught each time we touched 
                           Sounds of love galore 
                   Should we ever kiss once more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Sexual sight AND sounds. yes, and cologne can be so sexy as well!! Nice.
Harris Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 10:32 PM
Thank you Andrea. I agree that cologne is a sexy "thing". ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
C. Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:15 PM
I see, you have many followers, and it Looks like I'm one of them! I enjoyed this one!
Harris Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Thank you D.C. I am happy to report that the number of people has increased. Welcome
Ellison Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 5:47 PM
I'm waiting... LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx
Harris Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Ok Jack (: ...walkin' on sunshine...RH
Ellison Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 5:50 PM
BTW love your sign off... walkin; on sunshine! xxx
Cervenka Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Loved this, but I have a soft spot for sensual poetry. Very nice! ~Jan
Harris Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Hi Janet, thank you! I'm still looking for my perfect fit in the poetry world. ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
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April 27, 2015 at 2:24 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Rochelle ! - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Harris Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Ann-Lise. Your vote of confidence is very much appreciated! Happy writing! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
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April 26, 2015 at 8:41 PM
I like your reply Rochelle, thank you so much.. LINDA
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:39 PM
love is a beautiful thing, enjoyed your write. -always,p.d.
Harris Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:30 PM
P.D., love is definitely beautiful-- whether you're winning or losing depends a lot on how you play it and even more on how you see it, accept it, and spread it! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 4:45 AM
beautiful imagery Rochelle:-) hugs jan xx
Harris Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Thank you Jan- Now that I've found this place my pen is blazing with a desire to write, write and write again! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
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