'sensual Bliss'

while fingers explore
our lips discover new depths
sensual pleasure



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Contest: Sensuous Senryu
4th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Loving Iii Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:34 PM
i feel like i know you already. john
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:43 AM
I knew this one HAD to be a winner, Wilma. So happy for you, dear. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Love this one..congrats on your win. BG
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:53 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Congrats Wilma on your spectacular win with this super sensuous senryu ..oh wow.. perfection luv.. enjoy my friend...
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Aul Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Congrats, while I wipe the sweat from my brow.........George
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:50 AM
My congratulations on this ween in the contest of francine, Wilma
Muzzey Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your fourth place win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:02 AM
congrats on your 4th place win with this steamy senryu Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:17 AM
wilma, the subtle passion here is beautiful. erotica!.. my winning bet! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 4:58 AM
oh ..exciting lines so sultry and inviting Wilma.. good luck in the contest my friend.. let the fingers do the walking and pure delight luv..oh.
Austin Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Yes. Finger exploration is the most fun of all. Enjoyed. LOve, daver
Devonshire Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Hot, passionate poetry, Wilma. Francine will love this sensual entry. Wish I could respond more, but it's not possible now. Thanks for your prayers. Love you, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Email ur way Hun.....
K. Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 11:13 AM
hahaha! I am laughing because I just read Jack's comments below, lol :) funny Jack! oops I think I will comment below later-- sorry. As for you, Missy Steamy! I am so glad that your muse woke up in time! Haha I just knew that a contest like this would be right up your alley ;) both of us had those fingers and lips traveling ;) ooh lala senryu indeed ;) mwahugs :D
Horne Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Love this piece, Wilma. It's the first I've seen for this contest - I'm not sure how far we're allowed to go in this one. I was going to write about bulging pants etc and it would turn out the guy had a fat butt, but I see no humour is allowed. LOL, the first three letters of the Captcha thingy is EWW - it must have read about the guy's butt
Neels Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:10 PM
lol somehow these Captcha thingies pick up on our vibes Jack lol okay that is just me being crazy ;) thanks for the laughs and Missy I would not expect anything different from you then to jump on anything hilarious ;D
K. Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 11:14 AM
sorry Wilma, I am butting in here :D haha pun intended of course! and you are such a hoot, Jack :D btw told you these captcha thingies have brains! heehee at the "EWW" :D
Falotico Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Well as the saying goes " let the fingers do the walking...".... Its was 80 here but now 100 after that write!!! with love Michael
Peranteau Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 10:36 PM
Ohhh, I'm a definate fan dear poet ! Awesome Senryu ! Have a bright weekend Wilma...much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 4:34 PM
oooh la la, Wilma!! there are some steamy writes on here today!!
Sumler Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Wow! Pass me some of that sensual bliss'. Goodluck with this passionate write!
Hendricks Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Wow, homegirl!!! You know the saying "so 'n bek (pardon) moet heuning kry". This is great stuff. Good luck in Francine's contest. I'm rooting for you. Hugs, Licia. xxx
Fraser Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 12:42 PM
I love it my Sassy Lady, like the Senryu by Chris, it's made my mind go into overtime with it's thoughts. So few words can create so much. Good luck in Francine's contest. I may post another later, so keep a look out. Smiles for you my Sassy one :)
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