Kp Nunez Poet ABC

Sensual Awakening

Awakened by consuming desire-electrifying fusion,

gently hugged, intensely jubilant!

Knowing lips moisten, now our passion quickens -

rising…surging…tensing…undone!

Volcanic waves x-ray your zenith…





23 September 2015
Charlotte Puddifoot's Sensual ABCs Contest

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 8, 2015 at 2:14 AM Yet another fantastic win Kim! Big congrats!

Demetrios Trifiatis October 6, 2015 at 3:13 AM With grear joy I add my congratulations, dear Kim! Brilliant ABC! A 7.

Skat A October 4, 2015 at 6:52 PM Kim, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Balveen Cheema October 3, 2015 at 11:55 PM Wow! Congrats on your smooth flow leading to a win!

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2015 at 7:22 PM a well deserved win, Dearie. Congratulations.

James Inman October 3, 2015 at 6:07 PM I could feel the tension building, Kim. Very nice.

Eve Roper October 3, 2015 at 5:11 PM Congratulations on your win..... :-)

Connie Marcum Wong October 3, 2015 at 4:51 PM Oh I really love this entry Kim. Your choice of words defines class! A favorite for me! Congratulations Kim, on a fine win! #7

Charlotte Puddifoot October 3, 2015 at 4:37 PM this is a very well written abc, perfectly coherent with strong use of language and an excellent last line; electrifying and intense it surely is! congrats on your win in my contest :) Kp Nunez October 4, 2015 at 7:46 AM Thank you Charlotte. It was a challenging contest. Thank you for my placement and the inspiration. :-)

Sandra Haight October 3, 2015 at 2:46 PM Hi Kim, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison October 3, 2015 at 2:17 PM ohh la la lovely passionate write Kim congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Miraj Raha September 28, 2015 at 9:47 AM You've nailed it again.This one speaks of pure sensual beauty.loved the ending.I've added you as my fav poet already.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2015 at 8:15 PM oooh la la la la la. It SINGS with passion. THis one has GOT to make the winners' list!!

Paul Callus September 26, 2015 at 4:25 PM Pleasantly sensual...suggestive, without losing your grip on extreme intensity! Top marks for the content and apt handling of the situation:) Hugs // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane September 26, 2015 at 1:36 PM Enticing sensuality at it's best! Great write Kim! Hugs

Laura Breidenthal September 26, 2015 at 12:14 AM Love through the senses, not through words, not through clever speech, just all by the sensations the mind blesses us with. Awesome write Kim! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner September 25, 2015 at 1:56 AM Love's lava smoothly settles in the heart's excited sea...a very potent climax of passion, written with feral style Kim...J.A.B.

Lindsay Laurie September 24, 2015 at 11:11 PM You have slotted each word in really well Kim without altering the flow - well done - Lindsay

Sandra Haight September 24, 2015 at 7:13 PM Such great sensuality expressed in your flowing ABC, Kim. Very nicely done! All the best in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2015 at 3:08 PM love the fire and heat, kim... volcanic, indeed!.. greeat job!..huggs

Eileen Manassian September 24, 2015 at 12:05 PM Wonderful write, my dear. Enjoyed the build up to the climax. ;) Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 24, 2015 at 11:55 AM Pure glorification of sensuality, dear Kim! Superb! A7! Good luck!

Robert Lindley September 24, 2015 at 9:10 AM Deep and very sensual... Quite impressive in its depth.. A7 Good luck in that contest..

Richard Lamoureux September 24, 2015 at 4:16 AM This is certainly sensual, good luck in the contest.

Angie Thomas September 24, 2015 at 12:28 AM Really sensual poem with fabulous imagery. best of luck in the contest :)

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