Sensual

Kahlua drizzled on top Ice cream sliced like pie. Dark fudge floats in the center. Crumbled oreo crust Floating in hot fudge. Ambrosia Joy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Timperley Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Forgot the rating as I was distracted by the menu!! 777777!
Timperley Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:13 AM
I think I shall dislike you just for today only. My diet started yesterday and will probably end tomorrow now thanks to you! It was the crumbled oreo that did it and maybe the ice cream and/or the dark fudge.! A very slurpy write. Love it. God Bless D.
Diliberto Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:50 PM
now i have to go have dessert. And that means a walk around the block afterwards. Thanks alot lol,
Meyer Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 11:57 PM
You are quite welcome Mary
Callus Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:13 AM
sensually awesome; glad I stumbled on your poems :) // paul
Meyer Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Nice to meet you Paul! Thank you for your super compliment. And yes ... this dessert was awesome! ~J~
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 10:05 AM
This is sensually yummy Judith, my mouth waters reading this>>James
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:43 AM
marylyn monroe on a plate? Light & Love
Rider Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Decadent and oooh so yummy! Told ya so! I knew this one had the right "ingredients" to win! LOL Congratulations! ~Trudy~
Winter Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:42 AM
Judith, so happy for you and most definitely not surprised! Warmest congrats on your First Place win in Laura's contest! You should patent this recipe. It is to die for! ~lol~ Yes, I am a sweets lover! Hugs, Shar xoxo
Jordan Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Judith congratulations on winning the "Sweet Treat" contest - does sound delicious - God Bless, MJ
Townsend Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 11:22 PM
OMG this sounds so yummy. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. Great writing! Smiles from Lolita
Moreno Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 9:08 PM
Congrats on placing first in the contest...Raul
Esquire Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Dear Judith,Congratulations on YOUR first place Win in Laura Mckenzie's Sweet Treat Contest ALWAYS...HG
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:00 PM
A perfect winner of the contest....I'm on a sugar-high just reading this yummy poem!! Congratulations to you Judith!! Love, Carrie Yum!!!
Anderson Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 12:27 AM
this is art! beautiful structure
Rider Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 3:27 PM
Are you having a dinner party? When should I be there? I can bring wine or something...I'm sure Shar will pitch in too! mmmm
P. Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 5:38 AM
'Dark fudge FLOATS in the center'... yum!! tasty delight there... ~ Arany
Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 4:58 PM
yummy! Light & Love
Winter Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Ok lady, talk about competition - YUM!!! Yes, forget the steak, I will be over just for desert!!! (Actually would have both if I could!) Wish we could join each other for dinner. Would be lovely. And you owe me nothing as you do the same for me dear friend. Love & hugs, Shar
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