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Sensless ( Part Two )

In all these triumphs and human attainments 
To overcome these realities of material boundaries and confinements 
Do we simply fill our lives with possessions and possessive capitalist greed
Is it just ego and the fear of death that governs our sense of individuality

Have not all of us been children, been fathers or mothers, siblings and friends
Do we not count the emotion of another as being equal to our own
Are we not each and everyone, all of us in this together
Or does this blood run a different colour

Or do we waste our potential for mankind’s united evolvement
To reach for the inspiring pinnacle of our spiritual development
Mutually joined in a harmony of trust to the betterment of our destiny

When do we celebrate the diversity of our sense to make sense of the senseless

And so we have lingered through the century’s victim to our own disease
In progress and with education our intelligence still limited in tribal ignorance
The mathematic, scientific and technological revolution providing no solution

Simply confounded by our own simplicity and basic needs
For food and warmth, for shelter and love, for the relief of boredom
Cavemen of the mundane and slaves to acquisition and our own entertainment
As we merely continue to continue

Such is as we are, the problem vis-à-vis the individual and the global
Knowing all to well what we could achieve if we could but realise our dreams
Doomed to a life which creates nothing but want
And a daily reminder of all the things that we can’t

While the cradle of the Earth sickens with our planetary abuse
Have we truly lost ourselves in the all about the money all the way of things
Have we signed our fate over to our own arrogance and blind stupidity

When then do we celebrate our diversity of sense to make sense of "our" senseless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 4:45:00 PM
Wouldn't it be great if we could all sit down to dinner together and discuss our thoughts on this amazing write for hours and hours. Only those who actually care about making this a better world need be there of course. Well, let's just get rid of the senseless, celebrate our diversity and begin to live life the way we know we should. How great would that be. Just making light of a heavy duty poem reeking of reality. Awesome and I so love and agree with the way your mind works. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/9/2009 2:44:00 PM
A truly remarkable poem, Colin! So many great analogies and questions that deserve answers. Love "Cavement of the mundane and slaves to acquisition..." Your wisdom and vision jump off the page and beg to be heard. Outstanding Work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2009 2:35:00 PM
I agree with Chris: some of the smartest folks are among the most dense and ignorant of them all. I am all with Thoreau on this: Less is more. the smake eating its tail. all. right on friend, love, Kristin
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Date: 5/9/2009 2:08:00 PM
We can't get out of way with our thinking..I have seen some of the smartest people drowned in stupidity..living the same reoccurring nightmare because of their inability to see....we are doom to repeat the same mistake of centuries past because we are so connected yet so far apart....awesome writing.
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Date: 5/9/2009 12:43:00 PM
Ditto number one. Love, daver
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