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Sensing the Sea

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Sara Kendrick's Grounding Contest ~ 12/8/24

dark skies overhead the tide rolling in sand dunes and sea grass nimbus moving near distant lightning bolts wind in my hair a sudden chill sand under foot anxiety thunder's roar gulls squawking waves crashing the sea fresh air salt

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/18/2024 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write you have here. I enjoyed reading it. I love the sea with all of it's beauty. Oh the salt air in my hair. I do so miss it. You brought it back for a moment. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

Beau Barberis

Date: 12/16/2024 9:56:00 PM

This is perfection! Every line builds so beautifully. Love it!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:39:00 PM

'anxiety' sets apart. congratulations dear poet. Cheers!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2024 2:06:00 PM

Tangible! Congrats, Lin!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:51:00 AM

- That's exactly how the sea was today, Lin ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/11/2024 11:18:00 AM

Lin, you're making me remember some of the times I've spent on the shore with a thunderstorm in the vicinity. It's amazing how we can get that anxious feeling all of a sudden. You touch on some of the most striking feelings and sensations. Smiles.

John Lawless

Date: 12/8/2024 2:23:00 PM

does this come with an order of fries...hold the sea gulls...

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2024 3:59:00 PM

If I could hold the gulls the beach would be a no drop zone. lol

Jay Narain

Date: 12/8/2024 9:50:00 AM

Good grounding poem. Looks like na would be winner.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2024 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jay.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/8/2024 8:18:00 AM

Quite a spectacular scene Lin, rain or shine the sea and shore always seems to draw you in. And that taste of salt on your lips from the spray. Good luck. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2024 9:31:00 AM

I knew you’d get it, Tom. Thanks a lot.