Senses

The Universe.. In which we live Is entirely dominated by divine senses.. Our divine senses allows the reality.. In which we live .. Trough our senses we perceive.. Objectively we have five senses.. Subjectively we have much more.. Magnificent Universe.. Life.. Love and fear Experience.. To see To hear.. To touch.. Imagine a Universe.. Without our divine senses A reality in which is silenced.. In which is never seen In which is not fragrant In which is not felt A reality in which can never be touched.. Close your eyes.. Continue to imagine.. You cannot.. You cannot fandom.. A reality without divine senses.. You would cease to exist.. All lovely creatures in existence.. Every living thing.. Plants.. Animals.. Insects.. Perceive through their own senses Of which are different.. Different in comparison to humans.. A honeybee buzzing along it's merry way.. Will smell and taste sweet nectar in a flower How does a honeybee perceive us? How about any animal? Or trees and plants? Their perception of us is quite different.. Quite fascinating it is.. Distortions can apply .. Determining distortions is impossible.. Because you see.. You always believe.. In what you perceive.. Truth is your very own.. Truth is personal.. No truth is the same..

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/8/2018 6:06:00 PM

Hello Robertina, The last verse is the one i like the best of your poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Robertina B.
Date: 6/9/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and visit, Darlene.. All the best!!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/29/2018 10:54:00 PM

Hello Robertina ... thought provoking and very relevant - nicely written - Lindsay

Robertina B.
Date: 4/30/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thanks so much, Lindsay!! Really appreciate your visit and kind words.. All the best to you!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2018 2:08:00 PM

- Reasonable thoughts in your beautiful poem, Robertina - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robertina B.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Anne-Lise!! Always a pleasure when you visit..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 4/28/2018 5:50:00 PM

I have to agree with Line below. Your perspective on everything is uber unique and I can 'sense' your thought process around this story. Very unique, so in my favourites. L

Robertina B.
Date: 4/29/2018 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Leanne!! I always enjoy your lovely visit.. Many blessings to you!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/27/2018 7:06:00 AM

A lovely read, Robertina. Love your perspective.

Robertina B.
Date: 4/27/2018 3:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line.. Always look forward to your feedback ..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2018 1:33:00 AM

Just want to thank you for introducing me to the 'Divine Sense' and so much more in this wonderful poem. I had always stopped at "Intuition/6th sense/ESP." Thanks to you I see clearly that I was like unto those who were convinced that the world is flat. Gratefully yours, :) gw

Robertina B.
Date: 4/27/2018 3:10:00 PM

As always thank you for your lovely feedback, Gershon... A pleasure!!!