Sense of Home

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12/3/2024 for A Grounding Technique Poetry Contest sponsored by Sara Kendrick

Pic's of friend's grandkids,
my son, his girlfriend 
A wooden mallard
A wooden mustang
My grandpa's paintings

My game keyboard
December chill
An itchy back
A cold, wet nose

Neighbor's chat
Creaking walls
Toasty dryer

Hot tea
ginger

Scone

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 3:44:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. I am now wondering was that ginger tea or did he have a piece of gingerbread or gingerbread man cookie? It was so real like being there. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 12/17/2024 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Sara! It was just ginger tea. A few slices of ginger boiled in water. A gingerbread cookie sure sounds good, though.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:38:00 PM

ginger tea!!! congratulations dear poet. Cheers.

David Crandall
Date: 12/16/2024 9:32:00 PM

Yep, I love it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2024 1:57:00 PM

Enjoyed! Inviting! Congrats, David!

David Crandall
Date: 12/16/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:53:00 AM

- Have a lovely December chill, David ... a great poem ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 12/16/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise - not as cold as where you live! Merry Christmas!

Crystol Woods

Date: 12/5/2024 5:52:00 PM

Hey hey hey! We are so similar According to this poem! I just submitted one called Home. I love yours! It's definitely homey, comforting feel to it. Xoxo

David Crandall
Date: 12/5/2024 7:10:00 PM

I just checked yours out Crystol. What can I say - I think it's a matter of great minds thinking alike! :-)