Sense

Do you remember how she smelled
like Christmas?

How she smiled
like rain?

Do you think of her, sometimes
when snow and laundry soap
fill your senses?

Or when the wind catches the leaves
and they laugh in your ear
sing you to sleep?

Maybe it's the reason your eyes cloud over
when you feel silk 
against your fingers

Because for a moment 
you're cradled in her arms
Peter Pan and Hook
tugging at your eyelashes

Some bittersweet reminisce 
of quilted portrait frames
salted tears
and candy-cane red lipstick
tuning your dreams

And with simple twinges of regret
feather-like brushes of remorse
you cave
collapse

 Wish you could remember more
than a smell
or a sound
fainter than teardrops

Wish everything didn't remind you
you couldn't.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Goff Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 7:41 PM
pensive, delightful!!!! jimbo
Mehta Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Very well expressed thoughts on sense, Sarah
Burton Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 10:29 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry here and I really enjoyed reading it today. Have a pleasant day and happy holidays.
Kaabour Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Sarah, this is a brilliant poem. It was a fun read and I loved the allusions to Peter Pan and Hook. Very mesmerizing, this piece really does speak to one's senses =)
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