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Sense

Do you remember how she smelled like Christmas? How she smiled like rain? Do you think of her, sometimes when snow and laundry soap fill your senses? Or when the wind catches the leaves and they laugh in your ear sing you to sleep? Maybe it's the reason your eyes cloud over when you feel silk against your fingers Because for a moment you're cradled in her arms Peter Pan and Hook tugging at your eyelashes Some bittersweet reminisce of quilted portrait frames salted tears and candy-cane red lipstick tuning your dreams And with simple twinges of regret feather-like brushes of remorse you cave collapse Wish you could remember more than a smell or a sound fainter than teardrops Wish everything didn't remind you you couldn't.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/16/2011 7:41:00 PM
pensive, delightful!!!! jimbo
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:37:00 PM
Very well expressed thoughts on sense, Sarah
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:29:00 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry here and I really enjoyed reading it today. Have a pleasant day and happy holidays.
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:22:00 AM
Sarah, this is a brilliant poem. It was a fun read and I loved the allusions to Peter Pan and Hook. Very mesmerizing, this piece really does speak to one's senses =)
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