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C.O.N.F.U.S.I.O.N Observed silence to break your reticence With my utterance you lost patience I.L.L.U.S.I.O.N To me, I was talking SENSE But then Sense imbibes meaning dense Off I went, to trace the desired SENSE Shortly found embedded stone at distance Depicting an engraving SENSE Beholding it my joy knew no fence R.E.A.L.I.S.A.T.I.O.N Dug at base with due reverence Only to trace NON prefixing the desired SENSE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ February 2011 For Members Contest - 12-IN-1 ...Choose your forte by John Heck ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 12/29/2010 6:35:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Hitendra. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:59:00 AM
Funny write.... I am glad to read this early morning.... my mind seems dense have not had a coffee yet.
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:34:00 AM
what a transformation from confusion to realization... a sparkling, philosophical gem fron your fluid pen, hitendra.. namaste! warmest, nette
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