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Sensations

Street-lights golden nuggets on a plane I shimmer with anticipation Aircraft dips left like a soaring hawk Golden eyes zero in on its prey Aloft and descending turbulence Undercarriage open like talons Binocular vision so alert As screeching rubber thumps the tarmac Decelerate adrenal glands pump Undoing buckles my thoughts floating About casual normality Within casual catastrophe We have naturally come so far Yet I feel so unnatural here Aircraft mobiles cars cities and things Overwhelming sophistication Better to lie in my earthen bed Feeling the pulse of my heart beating Better to be the hawk in the sky Feeling the wind ruffle through my wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 5:53:00 AM
Oh wow! those words..where did it come from?! loved it
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:16:00 AM
Visual drama David... luv the tenure of every line my friend... golden eyes zero in on it's prey... awesome..luv..
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Date: 1/28/2011 11:19:00 PM
I feel like you might be spaceman in this poem, and I love the image of the hawk and how you would rather be in the earthen bed. I think I would too! Long time no see, David!! Glad to see this poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:45:00 PM
a very sensationable write, enjoyed this one David,..p.d.
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:01:00 PM
Enjoyed the ride today....thank you for flying Byrne today, hope we can be your airline of choice! LOL
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