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Spring's arrived at last, she wears her green dress as I go rambling on lush verdant hills This season's so special I will confess I pick some beautiful gold daffodils their xanthic colour relieves any stress after depressing days of winter chills Fluffy newborn lambs gambol in the fields I love the rebirth that spring always yields Spring Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh NB poetic licence used ... I never pick wild flowers just ones growing in my garden 02/20/21

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/24/2021 10:43:00 AM

Love the picture of the lambs and daffodils, Jan! Congratulations on your win! Spring has truly sprung up in your words! Hugs and blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/24/2021 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. So pretty with your green dress and beautiful gold daffodils. What an Easter dress. Have a blessed day with your win.................

Juliet Ligon

Date: 2/24/2021 8:43:00 AM

Aww, I can just picture all the baby animals. That last line is perfect, the glory of spring. Congrats!

Constance La France

Date: 2/24/2021 6:38:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem and I love your image too _ Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/24/2021 6:19:00 AM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jan! Janice

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/24/2021 6:14:00 AM

Hi Jan. I'm back to say congratulations on the win! Linda

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/24/2021 4:12:00 AM

This is a beauty. I love it. Congrats on the win and love and prayers sent your way. God bless you, Gina

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/23/2021 1:00:00 PM

Just so beautiful! I see a win!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/23/2021 12:55:00 PM

A fabulous picture of spring, Jan! I hope you will soon see the little lambs frolicking again. Best wishes for a big win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/23/2021 11:58:00 AM

This is a bright and cheery write Jan. I'm ready for it after the freakish snow/ice storms we're had in Texas! Linda

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/22/2021 6:57:00 AM

Jan, I love "Spring's arrived at last, she wears her green dress" ...so happy and visual and lovely in all of its details. Best of luck in the contest! Susan :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/22/2021 4:10:00 AM

Beautiful indeed! I do love the spring.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/21/2021 10:28:00 AM

Jan really liked the way you did this poem especially spring in green dress. All the best for the contest. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2021 7:17:00 AM

- A beautiful spring poem, Jan :) - I look forward to spring ... but, have to wait a bit ... no flowers or lambs yet :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2021 6:40:00 AM

WoW! Jan, You have penned a delightful poem about Spring. I can’t wait for it arrive. It is my favorite season of the year. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/20/2021 7:45:00 PM

Jan, What is it about Spring that fills our days with hope? I don't know, but your poem offers up all the most important clues. -Richard

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/20/2021 3:30:00 PM

Hello Jan, ah! Spring. Wish it were here. Itis snowing today. It will snow tomorrow to. Hugs Darlene.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/20/2021 1:03:00 PM

a lovely picture to accompany your charming spring poem, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2021 3:18:00 PM

thanks Ilene it is a lovely time of year:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/20/2021 12:23:00 PM

A very welcome season too Jan, already the evenings are longer and daffs growing everywhere. Good luck, hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2021 3:17:00 PM

yeah going fine still out of lockdown but we have a cluster of new cases brought in by someone who works on the ferry!:-( hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 2/20/2021 10:47:00 AM

That's a very springy little lamb, gamboling among the daffodils. Makes me yearn for warmer weather, but not for lamb chops.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2021 3:17:00 PM

ooh I love lamb but not chops there isn't enough meat on them lol:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/20/2021 10:39:00 AM

Well done, and it isn't even Saint David's Day, yet! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2021 3:16:00 PM

Ive already seen lambs in the field and daffodils trying to bloom but it is so windy I hope they dont open too soon and lose their lovely petals:-( hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2021 10:25:00 AM

Sensational poem on spring. Great poetry. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2021 3:14:00 PM

thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx