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Senryu - It Was Halloween Night, And

white in the shadows
souls emerge of the long dead-
           I  h e a r d  my name called



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October 12, 2017

Senryu/it was Halloween night, and
Copyright Protected, ID 949123


Written for the contest, Halloween Senryu
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2017

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2017 7:03:00 AM Wow! Chills! Congrats, Constance! <3 Kim Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/24/2017 5:14:00 AM oh I heard my name called, that creeped me out, I wouldn't want my name called! Thank you and congrats :) Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 10/23/2017 9:44:00 PM Not yet BW. You have many years to come. Great write. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/23/2017 4:27:00 PM A shivery situation! I like your interpretation of this picture, Constance. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 10/23/2017 3:54:00 PM Scarily fine write Broken Wings, congrats :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2017 3:18:00 PM Good and eerie, Constance. a HUGE congrats for this one. Login to Reply

Roy Pett Date: 10/23/2017 11:56:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, great Senryu, so well written. :)) Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 10/23/2017 11:20:00 AM ..OK, I'll be sleeping with the lights on tonight.....eerily whispered last line...great job BW Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 10/23/2017 10:44:00 AM Congratulations BW... Login to Reply

Joseph Soper Date: 10/23/2017 7:24:00 AM Great mood depicted in this write... Congrats on the win Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/23/2017 6:52:00 AM Oooh nice! Congratulations dear :) xomo! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/23/2017 5:09:00 AM Awesome, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win hugs Eve Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 10/14/2017 6:37:00 AM Oooh, spooky write, BW!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2017 12:02:00 PM ohhhh, you got a GREAT ending line and that is what makes a senryu more than fine! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/13/2017 8:29:00 AM This is a frightening write my friend! Your extension of "heard" is quite effective here! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious and scary poem here this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/13/2017 4:14:00 AM Nice write. It goes so well with the photo. One wonders who it is that is calling. Good luck, Dear. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/12/2017 6:37:00 PM Nicely done, Broken Wings, good for the contest , hugs Eve Login to Reply