Senryu - 12

unanswered letters drift aimlessly off to sea words no longer speak

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Paloma P

Date: 10/13/2016 5:55:00 AM

Sentimental Senryu. Silence can be a lethal weapon.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/9/2016 7:32:00 AM

Very sad for a senyru. Engaging words though. Well penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 7:25:00 PM

wow, this is STRONG, Tim. I LOVE it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/8/2016 2:07:00 PM

Sometimes silence says it best...Really enjoyed this senryu..Sad..very sad but beautiful.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/8/2016 9:25:00 AM

Brings to mind, messages in a bottle, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2016 8:30:00 AM

- A touching poem, great written Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/8/2016 9:06:00 AM

Thank you A-L.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/8/2016 7:38:00 AM

Very nice read!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/8/2016 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Abdullah.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2016 6:59:00 AM

One of your best short poems Tim! so few words build up such a sad picture:-) hugs Jan xx fave xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/8/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Jan. Don't where this came from, my mind was all over. I was up all night with a sick kid. She is better this morning bouncing off the walls.