Senryu 8/13

More yesses than nos Many more trips to the zoo Memories to save

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/17/2010 5:34:00 PM

I like this one very much....such sage and wisdom looking back. Congratulations on your winning poem! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest " Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 7:00:00 AM

Glad to see this one in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 8:13:00 PM

Congrats on well deserved win, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2010 7:44:00 PM

VERY wise senryu. Congratulations, Joyce!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2010 6:51:00 PM

Congratsw Joyce on your winning poem in Paula's contest .. wise words to heed ..enjoy another sweet victory ..with luv.. my friend..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2010 4:41:00 AM

Nice alliteration and well penned , Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2010 1:44:00 PM

Interesting write..Having to remember to say yes when we feel like the answer should be no is not easy...Great write..Enjoyed..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2010 12:19:00 PM

Oh, how much fun it is to go to the zoo, especially when you have youngsters with you! This is delightful, Joyce. Summer memories to savor! Best wishes in the end of summer contest. Love, Carolyn