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Senryu 5 - Decadent

dark choc'late kisses melting slowly in my mouth -- decadent pleasure. written 2/15/12 Entered into PD's Any poem of the week contest.

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Date: 2/23/2012 9:30:00 AM
cxongrats Kim on a fantastic win for this yummy treat.. so cool.. enjoyed luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 4:56:00 AM
the pleasure is in this poem!
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:45:00 AM
better than vocal intercourse between relatives......love it mate....
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:27:00 PM
KIM.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:26:00 PM
I like the dark chocolate ones better myself. Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:57:00 AM
Taste touches the tongue makes to feel pleasure, lovely dark Chocolate. Enjoyed and loved, bl
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Date: 2/17/2012 5:24:00 AM
Yes, they are good and safe treat for Valentine's or any day..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:40:00 AM
Good on you Kim, these melting moments are captured wonderfully here. love this. harry
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