Senryu 4-8-2018

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Ah, the good old days. A tent, a rainstorm, a deck of cards, kids, and parents, together.....

cold rain, leaky tent childish laughter wrapped in canvas go fish John G. Lawless ©4/19/2018

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2018 12:25:00 PM

ohh, it's all about attitude, john... impressed by your poetic shift!..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2018 6:20:00 PM

wonderful imagery of family times of yesteryear .... but I think this is now very much in the past as they don't have wifi and internet connection and consoles in tents :-( hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 4/20/2018 7:13:00 AM

Sort of a contradiction the "inclusive" societal structure of today. I look forward to teaching my grandchildren to play Checkers.....heheheh.....and I never let them win....