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Senryu 14 - Off To Rest

yesterday's memoirs flicker in soft candlelight my quill's off to rest

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/30/2017 4:01:00 PM

Very soothing poem! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/29/2017 8:12:00 AM

Hope your quill wakes up feeling energetic and refreshed, Tim:) loved this senryu:)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/29/2017 7:09:00 AM

Rest assured we will await the quill's awakening!:) Amitiés

Darren White

Date: 4/29/2017 5:51:00 AM

Make sure the quill doesn't rest for too long! Sleep well, my friend :) See you later.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2017 7:43:00 PM

Lovely senryu ink!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2017 7:05:00 PM

That middle line is really great, and then the last line is just CUTE!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/28/2017 3:53:00 PM

Such a beauty this is Tim.. Indeed it is..

Tim Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 3:57:00 PM

Thanks Charma...just a little something

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2017 3:25:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful imagery ... I hope the quill doesn't rest too long!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 4/28/2017 3:27:00 PM

Just today Jan... chasing the little one around after a trip to the dentist