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Senryu 11-20-2016

Senryu 11/20/2016 old pottery jugs cracking with the weight of age silently weeping John G. Lawless 11/20/2016

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Date: 11/21/2016 8:59:00 AM
A7 Senryu ... Unique ...
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Date: 11/21/2016 4:03:00 AM
Compelling image.
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Date: 11/21/2016 2:17:00 AM
You compose these short forms so beautifully John great metaphor another gem of a poem... I have a very old cracked vase - would never let it go it holds so many memories but as a vase its absolutely useless - old age is no fun:-( hugs Jan
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