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Senryu - Setbacks

to be  s t r o n g  I must
     get hurt and have setbacks-
                  s t e p p i n g   s t o n e s  forward




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July 6, 2016



Poetry/Senryu/set backs
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Jack Horne Date: 7/10/2016 4:26:00 PM oh, yes - such wisdom here Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 7/8/2016 6:51:00 PM Broken Wings, love this master piece without the picture still has a great impact a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/8/2016 5:49:00 PM you found a cool way to do it, Constance. I have my idea. Just can't get it to fit in the dang syllable count!!! Login to Reply

Jesse Day Date: 7/8/2016 8:47:00 AM I love it - hurt and pain are the stepping stones of your strength. So much can be learned from this - thanks! Beautifully presented - I'm sure to see you in the winner's circle. Jesse Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 7/7/2016 8:59:00 PM nice presentation in this senryu BW asking the question "am I strong because of the setbacks or have the setbacks made me strong. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 7/7/2016 4:17:00 PM Hi BW, You have met the challenge with this write.You said much in these three lines. I have feeling you will be in the winners cirlcle. Good luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Robert Heemstra Date: 7/7/2016 4:15:00 PM Well put! Good luck in contest! Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 7/7/2016 3:59:00 PM Broken Wings, this is amazing lady. So much is said in such few words, will do well in the contest, good luck!!! :)-luloo Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 7/7/2016 2:30:00 PM Indeed, literally no pain, no gain. Good luck, BW. Viv x Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 7/7/2016 9:11:00 AM I like it! Without setbacks we never learn, just keep stepping! ;) Login to Reply