Senryu - Setbacks

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to be s t r o n g I must get hurt and have setbacks- s t e p p i n g s t o n e s forward ______________________________ July 6, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/set backs Copyright Protected, ID 16-806-740-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/10/2016 4:26:00 PM

oh, yes - such wisdom here

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2016 6:51:00 PM

Broken Wings, love this master piece without the picture still has a great impact a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2016 5:49:00 PM

you found a cool way to do it, Constance. I have my idea. Just can't get it to fit in the dang syllable count!!!

Jesse Day

Date: 7/8/2016 8:47:00 AM

I love it - hurt and pain are the stepping stones of your strength. So much can be learned from this - thanks! Beautifully presented - I'm sure to see you in the winner's circle. Jesse

John Lawless

Date: 7/7/2016 8:59:00 PM

nice presentation in this senryu BW asking the question "am I strong because of the setbacks or have the setbacks made me strong.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2016 4:17:00 PM

Hi BW, You have met the challenge with this write.You said much in these three lines. I have feeling you will be in the winners cirlcle. Good luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis