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Senryu-Homecoming

Cinderella dreams exquisite gowns all around empty wallets cry

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/24/2016 3:05:00 AM

Fantastic my friend, Timotheos! A seven. Merry Christmas my friend!

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/23/2016 1:22:00 PM

Oh my goodness, that was a good one sweets. is it homecoming time already? send me a pic of her all dressed up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2016 3:24:00 PM

this is AWESOME senryu, I love it, Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 9/13/2016 3:25:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2016 8:47:00 AM

Ha ha, I'm glad sons are les complicated.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/13/2016 10:39:00 AM

Yes my boys are so easy when it comes to things like this. Maybe a new shirt.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2016 12:03:00 AM

Oh i like this, this was very...... ah true!!!!!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/13/2016 10:38:00 AM

Don't I know it...lol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2016 9:16:00 PM

A perfect senryu...many don't know how to write a senryu Tim. This is excellent! ; ) 7

Tim Smith
Date: 9/13/2016 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Connie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/12/2016 3:17:00 PM

Oh did your girl choose a Cinderella costume? ::)..Oh She must have picked an expensive one ..: ). Enjoyed this Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/12/2016 4:58:00 PM

She chose an expensive designer dress :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 9/12/2016 3:09:00 PM

Lol,the exquisite ones are expensive:)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/12/2016 4:37:00 PM

Yes

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/12/2016 2:15:00 PM

Know that feeling...Wait till the wedding bells ring.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/12/2016 2:32:00 PM

I don't even want to think that far off...lol

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/12/2016 1:39:00 PM

Very funny! Dresses are definitely not cheap. You made me laugh, Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/12/2016 1:42:00 PM

I can't wait until prom...lol