Senior Moments Two Poems In One
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This a response to the end rhyme form Brenda describes in her contest, a rhyme poem (in this case a footle) within a poem.
HG Harvey Daniel and Dane introduced in 2010 their 'end line form(ELF) here on PS and this poem of mine is a tribute to that creation by extending it from a word to my footle form
SENIOR MOMENTS
Here I am at a very great old age with same chat
for these days I can only recall old tales, off pat
Toothless now and decayed so no, long kiss
for that's certainly something best, to miss
Reading with a magnifying glass in , large print
with very strong glasses for close-up, or squint
In my chair most afternoons having, no sap
having to pace myself or without doubt , need nap
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2017
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