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Senior Jolly Follies

12/2/2023 Oh, the excruciating job of finding a comfortable pair of shoes! And why do we fall asleep so darn early at night? Driving after sundown is a fright! Hey, gravity, stop pulling on my face! There's a younger man I wish to date! Desiring to dance like a sexy Sambista, but why does sitting seem to be my fate. Can you please help me bring the those groceries in? Stop staring at me~that's really no sin. By the way, what's my cousin's phone number, I cannot recall. Seniors to God, are close and very dear. What's that you said, my dear? So sorry, I cannot hear!

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Date: 12/6/2023 9:18:00 AM
Dear, sweet Pangie I smiled all the way through reading this very funny, entertaining poem. So many people can relate to a lot of what you have cleverly written about. The picture is brilliant too and the title! The last stanza .in particular, is so humorous. So enjoyed reading it. Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs and smiles to you xx:):)
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Date: 12/6/2023 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much ,,Christina ! I am so pleased you liked the that funny title, and cartoon . The vartoon Inspired my poem. The t shirt…” Old but not extincr” Had me in tears laughing. That last stanza is me! Always saying to my daughter,,What what.)) but my mind thinks like a 40 year old. I can be seriuos or silly. I feel free to be me. And nothunting for approval. I got to a poinrt in my life,lomg ago. Wgen I realized loyalty to myself comes first.. to a group?Hardly as group can turn their back son you very fast, so I don’t live to please. Pangie thank you !xxxx
Date: 12/4/2023 8:32:00 PM
Hahahahaha... I've already forgotten. Why am I laughing?... ~ Senor Senior
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:40:00 PM
Rpflmao! Don’t fret, I know that feeling! I do think you are joshing with me! Best to you and yours. Pangie xxxx
Date: 12/3/2023 8:07:00 AM
What a fun/creative write/cute picture. Thanks for the laugh...  Enjoy a blessed/wonderful day..................
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Date: 12/4/2023 11:23:00 AM
You made a terrific point! Paula, laughter is important. I am glad you liked this.. may your day be magical. Pangie xxx
Date: 12/2/2023 6:25:00 PM
hahahaha,,The first line is me, Hell find me a good comfortable shoe and not at teen-shoe. Second line, less sleep and up all hours of the night going pee. Third, fourth line, I just don't drive at night unless an in emergency like a trip to the Hospital. Saggy skin, a Bra just makes them uncomfortable. Fifth line, NO, young men never had never will.. I always liked them way older then me. Memory loss was lost years ago. You are on a roll my friend. Bless you
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Date: 12/2/2023 6:49:00 PM
Hey Eve! Looks like we are sisters in aging, except for the men. I hardly go out dancing anymore cause I can’t. Once I broke my leg, my dancing days ended. And be grateful you can still drive I can’t. I can’t even make it to the car.. but tell you what… I am very grateful to be alive and have no other health issues. I think I told you once I stay far away from doctors. I only see mine twice a year.. that’s all. But it would be fun to be young again you agree! I would love it. To be able to run again that would be super.. that anything after 6 o’clock at night that might help with your having to go to the bathroom. Sorry to bring it up but it’s a real issue for people not only older people. And people in their 40s can sleep.. oh listen enjoy whatever abilities we have. And most of all be grateful for them.. Pangie xxxxx as I said to Sara.. Check out the cartoon. I don’t think it was there when you read it. )))
Date: 12/2/2023 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie, for a bit of humor in these dark days! Bob
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Date: 12/2/2023 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for you rich input Bob, I might try to get a cartoon posted later today, These days are dark to the aware only. ~Who know up from down.~ as you do! Congratulations! Pangie.
Date: 12/2/2023 12:04:00 PM
Quite humorous, Pangie! You are quite the versatile poetess. I needed this poem of mirth today, thank you for this. Shalom, good friend. ~ xxxx
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Date: 12/2/2023 1:08:00 PM
So glad to see you and your heart smile, THAT did me a world of good, thank you, Regina, I can be far crazier, )))But it’s hard to do these days. This is but a simple poem, the arms of friendship hug even simple poens, don’t you agree! Shalom, sweetness, and bless you for sharing your soul.! Pangie.xoxo
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