Black Eyed Susan Poet Verse

Senator's Puppet Wife

hand on back
drilled smile
he milks me
from behind

vote Monty
mochadoodle 
moo


9/20/12
Black Eyed Susan
for nette's "septolet the puppet" contest

fabric: drill – double meaning of practice and durable twill cotton (also, cottonmouth refers to a dangerous snake as well as "an uncomfortable condition that feels as if your mouth is coated with cotton. http://www.ehow.com/how_8412538_fix-cottonmouth.html#ixzz278lYPjBG)

flavor: mochadoodle – not kidding! it's a flavor of coffee: milk chocolate, cinnamon, and hazelnut 

(Monty is a made up senator - referring to the expression "the fully monty" - meaning everything that is expected or possible)

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Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2012 at 6:00 PM soupmail.

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:50 AM Hola, Susan,,Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 28, 2012 at 8:12 AM Big congratulations Susan , have you ever seen the film "Full Monty" lol xx

Carol Sunshine Brown September 28, 2012 at 5:30 AM Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 27, 2012 at 5:35 PM I've seen some of these wives mouthing force-fed words. Great entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 5:05 PM Congrats in the contest, Susan, it was a very clever one, maybe the humor too political to be totally understood by some. you always add such a unique style to the contests!!

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM A polititian puppet [giggle] I guess she was a lady cow? Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Kash Poet September 27, 2012 at 1:48 PM Beautiful verse here Susan.Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2012 at 10:17 PM CONGRATS SUSAN ON A SPECTACULAR WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Joseph May September 26, 2012 at 5:19 PM congrats on your win Susan

Carrie Richards September 26, 2012 at 3:04 PM This is so funny!! Well done, Susan........you took this new twist and it worked beautifully!

Richard Palmer September 26, 2012 at 7:17 AM very educational,thanks BES,great write best wishes in the contest

Laura Breidenthal September 25, 2012 at 12:52 PM Interesting piece, very nice one! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2012 at 10:04 PM hmmm, no new one for me to see yet!! thanks for reading two of my poems, Susan.

Joseph May September 24, 2012 at 1:32 PM nicely written Susan....good luck in the contest...hugs...Joseph

Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2012 at 9:47 AM Hi Susan, another awesome poem,, The image above reminds me of a movie called "DEATH SILENCE" where the wife is controlling her dead hubbies body through an opening in his back, like a ventriloquist... love your verse.. always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 24, 2012 at 9:44 AM simply great Susan and I found out some things did not know from your informative footnote luv ... a unique spin on the puppet contest .. winning wishes .. glad u enjoyed my pinball poem .. with 5 small boys I was a regular "arcade Mom" so O learned all the games .. my fav is still Mario and Luigi .. I got thru screens one and two but three was my nemesis ..haha

Jack Horne September 22, 2012 at 1:57 PM lol, great play on words here, Susan - a sure winner

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2012 at 3:28 PM Well done B.E.S. - Luck to you in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman September 21, 2012 at 8:25 AM this is very clever Susan, you sure are something else....

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2012 at 3:36 AM The best to you in the contest Susan. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2012 at 9:09 PM This is cute, Susan. Since you asked me, I think Doo would be funnier since it reminds me of cock a doodle doo. But maybe you could say dew, like mountain dew! Moo also is good, however, because it uses milk and moo goes along with a cow sound. Gosh, I just don't know. They would both sound good. I have never heard of this Monty guy. He is senator in your state? Lots of great cleverness in this poem.

Russell Sivey September 20, 2012 at 1:20 PM This is a fantastic write my friend, quite the special poem! You have cleverly portrayed the stringed creature with ease! Thank you for the definitions Susan, I would have been lost without them! Awesome piece, Great Work!!

Constance La France September 20, 2012 at 12:08 PM Hi Susan, this is a wonderful entry for nette's contest, best of luck and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your If These Walls Could Talk Contest, I am very honoured. Love Constance

Kash Poet September 20, 2012 at 9:36 AM Very nice approach!!Best wishes.