Senator's Puppet Wife

hand on back
drilled smile
he milks me
from behind

vote Monty
mochadoodle 
moo


9/20/12
Black Eyed Susan
for nette's "septolet the puppet" contest

fabric: drill – double meaning of practice and durable twill cotton (also, cottonmouth refers to a dangerous snake as well as "an uncomfortable condition that feels as if your mouth is coated with cotton. http://www.ehow.com/how_8412538_fix-cottonmouth.html#ixzz278lYPjBG)

flavor: mochadoodle – not kidding! it's a flavor of coffee: milk chocolate, cinnamon, and hazelnut 

(Monty is a made up senator - referring to the expression "the fully monty" - meaning everything that is expected or possible)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/29/2012 6:00:00 PM
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:50:00 AM
Hola, Susan,,Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:12:00 AM
Big congratulations Susan , have you ever seen the film "Full Monty" lol xx
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Date: 9/28/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2012 5:35:00 PM
I've seen some of these wives mouthing force-fed words. Great entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/27/2012 5:05:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, Susan, it was a very clever one, maybe the humor too political to be totally understood by some. you always add such a unique style to the contests!!
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:49:00 PM
A polititian puppet [giggle] I guess she was a lady cow? Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:48:00 PM
Beautiful verse here Susan.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/26/2012 10:17:00 PM
CONGRATS SUSAN ON A SPECTACULAR WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:19:00 PM
congrats on your win Susan
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Date: 9/26/2012 3:04:00 PM
This is so funny!! Well done, Susan........you took this new twist and it worked beautifully!
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Date: 9/26/2012 7:17:00 AM
very educational,thanks BES,great write best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/25/2012 12:52:00 PM
Interesting piece, very nice one! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/24/2012 10:04:00 PM
hmmm, no new one for me to see yet!! thanks for reading two of my poems, Susan.
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:32:00 PM
nicely written Susan....good luck in the contest...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:47:00 AM
Hi Susan, another awesome poem,, The image above reminds me of a movie called "DEATH SILENCE" where the wife is controlling her dead hubbies body through an opening in his back, like a ventriloquist... love your verse.. always~ PD
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:44:00 AM
simply great Susan and I found out some things did not know from your informative footnote luv ... a unique spin on the puppet contest .. winning wishes .. glad u enjoyed my pinball poem .. with 5 small boys I was a regular "arcade Mom" so O learned all the games .. my fav is still Mario and Luigi .. I got thru screens one and two but three was my nemesis ..haha
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:57:00 PM
lol, great play on words here, Susan - a sure winner
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Date: 9/21/2012 3:28:00 PM
Well done B.E.S. - Luck to you in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2012 8:25:00 AM
this is very clever Susan, you sure are something else....
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Date: 9/21/2012 3:36:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Susan. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:09:00 PM
This is cute, Susan. Since you asked me, I think Doo would be funnier since it reminds me of cock a doodle doo. But maybe you could say dew, like mountain dew! Moo also is good, however, because it uses milk and moo goes along with a cow sound. Gosh, I just don't know. They would both sound good. I have never heard of this Monty guy. He is senator in your state? Lots of great cleverness in this poem.
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Date: 9/20/2012 1:20:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend, quite the special poem! You have cleverly portrayed the stringed creature with ease! Thank you for the definitions Susan, I would have been lost without them! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:08:00 PM
Hi Susan, this is a wonderful entry for nette's contest, best of luck and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your If These Walls Could Talk Contest, I am very honoured. Love Constance
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:36:00 AM
Very nice approach!!Best wishes.
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