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Self Aware of Love

And she thought words were beautiful even in the early morning…. The heart she bare on her sleeve was as transparent as her apologetic warnings. Daydreaming consistently,she was flawed but not boring. . Her every breath inhaled the scent of constant passion; Pressing a pen onto paper was her weapon against reaction. The complexity of her ways. ..left even the wisest to contemplating for days. This is not just a phase. .To be cursed with the constant of empathetic waves. Being so humbled, it hurts. Life was no game;Her love just put you first. It’s just how she was created. .Never because she self -hated. . She never deserved to be ill-fated. . She says that she’ll Fake it. Fake it until she makes it. I believe her because she’s strong.Where she is, is where she belongs. This is how some are left confused-- Tilt there heads because there amused. Amused…to see someone not fighting to prove. Feeling no need to ramble bad vocabulary.Is in comparison quite the contrary. She enjoys observing the surroundings while listening. She want to get what she’s been giving. What Im trying to convey..Even if your in your battle everday. Never let others change your ways. Never let circumstances cause dismay.

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Date: 2/27/2018 11:31:00 AM
Hello Sara, this poem has a message for everyone. Your message is very clear. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/25/2017 4:14:00 PM
Hi Sara, I have read this p o em a few times, keep coming back to it...it has a definite rhythm to it, as Dale said, almost a rap rhythm...I think your thoughts are firmly stated, I love the first line, "And she thought words were beautiful Sven in the early morning..." ( a beautiful line...) I would just keep on writing as you do- I learnt a lot about poetry styles here, but ultimately you need to write the way feels good for you. Free verse is closest to your style. Keep writing!
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Sara Lucas
Date: 7/6/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much! Your reply meant a lot to me
Date: 6/6/2017 7:00:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, you do have a very excellent poetic skills, your rhyme, but honestly, no offend, but you should change your writing style I mean it was really difficult to read it in that way, organize them, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Sara Lucas
Date: 7/6/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much for liking my writing style! Genuinely means a lot tome
Date: 5/29/2017 5:13:00 PM
this strikes me as rap poetry. the previous comment is right: that it would be easier to read with line breaks. but good work.
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:26:00 PM
Your poem rhymes and I did read it, but it is a little hard to read like this... With line breaks at the right places it would be easier :) The poem would be great performed on stage by the way. Welcome to PoetrySoup!
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