Self

Look at you! You are going places 
You got that impulse of control in your eyes
You have a hunger that requires constant feeding 
From a passion burning deep within your radical stimulus
You devour all the barriers that stand in your way  
Rise above all the neutralizing slander of surrounding people
To be so chargeless and undisturbed by them
Your soul demands difference!
To sour with the eagles is your point of covergence
To dauntlessly grasp ahold of your dreams and take them into your possession
I stand envious of you Self, of your fire, of your heart 
I admire your light from afar that illuminates my sky 
Your growth is beautiful, like the blossom of a flower,
Brought forth from the rain and brilliance of the sun
To feel such compassion, such power, such indulgence 
Would be next to heaven for one like myself
So carry on Self, carry on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/22/2011 6:23:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
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Date: 10/11/2011 3:54:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Kiki. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:22:00 AM
well done Kiki, keep writing. lee
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:14:00 PM
Inspiring, creative, and powerful.
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Date: 10/7/2011 3:36:00 PM
wow! am short of words...fantastic..the best poem i have read so far this night..nice description and interpretation....love it
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