Self-Portrait... - Tanka

light won't reach my eyes...
for where my eyes carry me
light isn't born yet...
i'm only a wanderer
among dry unspoken words...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/11/2010 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Liliana. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:10:00 PM
congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:29:00 AM
among dry unspoken words ... brilliant end line ... congratulations on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Liliana. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2010 2:10:00 AM
love this. " dry unspoken words", im totally there with you. in this bankrupt world the only true currency is to be able to relate. i relate with you here. thanks.-Fish.
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:12:00 AM
Oh, those dark, dry places. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:18:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liliana. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:14:00 AM
A wonderful Tanka. Congrats on being featured this week. Caryl
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:17:00 PM
Congrats for being featured this coming week. Beautiful Tanka, dear Liliana. Foarte frumoasa poezie :) Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/6/2010 12:25:00 PM
beautifuly written.. very good my friend
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