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Self-Portrait... - Tanka

light won't reach my eyes... for where my eyes carry me light isn't born yet... i'm only a wanderer among dry unspoken words...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/11/2010 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Liliana. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2010 5:10:00 PM

congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 8/30/2010 7:29:00 AM

among dry unspoken words ... brilliant end line ... congratulations on being featured this week love Jayne

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Liliana. Love, Carol

Joe Fisher

Date: 6/26/2010 2:10:00 AM

love this. " dry unspoken words", im totally there with you. in this bankrupt world the only true currency is to be able to relate. i relate with you here. thanks.-Fish.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/25/2010 8:12:00 AM

Oh, those dark, dry places. Congrats on the selection. daver

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/23/2010 10:18:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/23/2010 10:09:00 AM