Self-Dissection

Self-dissection
By Stina lu 

Stab yourself with a sharp dagger 
Fresh blood splashing
No one stops you
There’s no piercing scream
No one scolds you 
There's no worry about curses and reprisals

To air your pure heart in the sunlight
Wipe gently the humble soul
To hold your guts high up in the sky
Let the moon and the sun penetrate and judge.

Stop the bee humming in your head
Place reason on the left brain
and passion on the right side. 
They don’t owe each other.

Dust covered thick in your lung
which should be peeled layer by layer.
Make your breath smooth again
Every alveoli feels fresh

After all this labor
Clean the wound and suture it 
Time will erase it 
A new lease on life
A reborn phoenix arises from the ash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/31/2017 2:51:00 PM
This poem speaks of nobility. It's always a good idea to stay humble. Good write.
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Date: 12/31/2017 7:23:00 PM
yes. Sometimes we forget the importance of self-criticism
Date: 11/25/2017 5:49:00 PM
Nice Poem
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Stina Lu
Date: 11/27/2017 7:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot.
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