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Self-Conciousness

Self-Consciousness White noise surrounds us each day. We do not even hear it over the din of living. Life is noisy, a constant barrage of sounds from all different directions, in all different pitch. A phone, music, loud heated discussions. The very moment I get an answer wrong, one can hear a pin drop. “A pin can be heard”--- Dropping tinny to the floor Why is it so quiet? Sunshine Williams

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/19/2016 10:44:00 AM

We are unaware of so much, it can be scarey - and then the pin drops, and a stranger shouts 'Boo' ! A meditative piece of writing, superbly executed.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/4/2016 6:15:00 PM

Thank you sooo my friend!!:), jill

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/23/2015 11:09:00 AM

Hi Jill! I finally caught up with you! Sorry for taking so long. Congratulations on your win in this toughly judged contest. Your piece is deeply thoughtful and sensitively written. I like it. hugs!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/25/2015 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Kim, yours blew me away! Hugs :), jill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2015 8:26:00 AM

Some hear noise and others hear music from the daily sounds..Have you ever seen the movie "October Sky"?...Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/25/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thank you Sara :), jill

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/21/2015 8:51:00 AM

I like how you lead this piece to the haiku. Though you I reckon you've got the wrong here, I think you mean hear. Thanks for entering my contest, and keep enjoying the haibun.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/25/2015 12:18:00 AM

Thank you for being a sponsor. Man, did it just get really quiet!:), jill

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2015 1:58:00 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win Jill with this amazing haibun!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/21/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Dr., this new form was exciting for me. I love the opportunities and support lent from ladies like your self :)< jill

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2015 6:38:00 PM

Jill, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/21/2015 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Skat! I am always thankful for your encouragement and thoughtfulness :), jill

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 12:18:00 PM

I love the saying you used Jill - sometimes I love silence othertimes i need nosie around me:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/21/2015 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much and kudos right back to you. This was one of the best contests yet...I feel privileged to even be mentioned amist this group of poets in the same breath..:), jill

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/2/2015 10:52:00 PM

Excellent one Jill. You have tried your best to bring before the world the sound of a sweet little pin. But in this world where drums are beaten without a break everywhere how the music and sound of a pin can be heard?

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/8/2015 1:51:00 AM

thank you for taking the time to read my piece :), jill

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2015 2:14:00 PM

Intresting write some times quiet is good a 7 Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola
Date: 8/8/2015 1:50:00 AM

hugs back, Eve :), jill