Selbstverbannung

Whispering caresses testify
   under duress with somber
   adoration.

How many sonnets have I
   forgotten
   while tracing the
   contours of your shape?

Your slick fragrance disarms my
   resolve; I yearn to
   bottle such essence

if only to keep a suggestion of
   us in the face of certain
   obliteration.

For once the skitter and
   the titter consume with
   fangs of speculation, we
   shall doubt

what we’ve begun
   in earnest
   under the moon,

the trust of synchronized
   pulses seeking
   harmony,

and the explosive
   thrill of shared
   desire

until nothing
   remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 8:12 AM
Such powerful emotion, brilliantly expressed with compelling phrasing. Who could resist such a title?? (I shall have to look it up!) Well done John!! Best wishes, Keith
Joe Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 3:43 AM
This is great. Like others I find the second stanza to be very powerful. But the overall impact of the poem works wonders. I don't think it is necessary to know the meaning (er, I'm not sure that you have spelt it right, I think it should be Selbstverbrennung: to do with self burning?) of the word to appreciate the beauty of this poem. That is down to the language of the piece. the layout of the narrative is very imaginative and makes for a great reading.
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 12:15 PM
The second stanza is excellent. Nice flow and imagery...Raul
Weber Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Wow, thanks for the comments! The name "Selbstverbannung" means "self banishment" in German. You guys are a fun family! Warm regards, John.
Shango Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 7:29 AM
A masterpiece of pure passion, I am lusting after every verse. A dexterious display of poetic talent, the title must be meaning something special, what is it? Love, L'nass
Martin Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 6:55 AM
very moving work here i loved it keep up the good work your friend Nita
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