Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Carpe Diem

Seize the Night

Things will work out 
tomorrow
just not on their own
every dog may have it's day
IF
they remember 
to bury the bones

Each star above
is yours
BUT 
you must envision the glow
seize the night 
and give the day you've borrowed
a beautiful show 

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Glenn Mccrary February 1, 2012 at 12:18 AM Damn! Now this is pretty deep and inspires logical thinking. Good work JSlam. :)

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2012 at 11:25 PM Joey, I especially liked the second stanza. Very lovely. I really envy you being in Florida. Not just in winter! I'd love to be by a beach!!

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2012 at 11:24 PM Don't know if I'm an auger. But maybe I'm a cougar. hahaha. Your comments to me were fun as usual. You may not be on drugs, but you seem to go way up and then you are gone for a while. What's up with that??Ok, let me read this one now!!

Robert Pettit January 12, 2012 at 12:01 AM Good advice here in a poetic way. Go go JS.

Rockman Pritts January 10, 2012 at 11:11 AM Good job JS. I liked it a lot. In fact, I read it through several times before writing the comment. Rockman

Sean Claudine January 9, 2012 at 12:49 AM wow man you're a really good writer, love the silent message.

Red Fiery January 8, 2012 at 11:04 PM this afternoon something cheered me up....ur wrds..they gave me some hope...yes we have to bury the bones....excellent wrk...I look forward to reading more and more of ur wrks..cheers

Russell Sivey January 8, 2012 at 10:12 PM Wow, Joey, that is a very good write! I love the showing you have here!! "every dog may have it's day" but they must bury the bones!! A very nice line here! I really enjoyed this poem, a little different than your usual isn't it?! Awesome Work!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 8, 2012 at 8:48 PM What a wonderful vision- love it, Brenda : )