Seize the Night

Things will work out tomorrow just not on their own every dog may have it's day IF they remember to bury the bones Each star above is yours BUT you must envision the glow seize the night and give the day you've borrowed a beautiful show

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Glenn Mccrary

Date: 2/1/2012 12:18:00 AM

Damn! Now this is pretty deep and inspires logical thinking. Good work JSlam. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 11:25:00 PM

Joey, I especially liked the second stanza. Very lovely. I really envy you being in Florida. Not just in winter! I'd love to be by a beach!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 11:24:00 PM

Don't know if I'm an auger. But maybe I'm a cougar. hahaha. Your comments to me were fun as usual. You may not be on drugs, but you seem to go way up and then you are gone for a while. What's up with that??Ok, let me read this one now!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/12/2012 12:01:00 AM

Good advice here in a poetic way. Go go JS.

Rockman Pritts

Date: 1/10/2012 11:11:00 AM

Good job JS. I liked it a lot. In fact, I read it through several times before writing the comment. Rockman

Sean Claudine

Date: 1/9/2012 12:49:00 AM

wow man you're a really good writer, love the silent message.

Red Fiery

Date: 1/8/2012 11:04:00 PM

this afternoon something cheered me up....ur wrds..they gave me some hope...yes we have to bury the bones....excellent wrk...I look forward to reading more and more of ur wrks..cheers

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2012 10:12:00 PM

Wow, Joey, that is a very good write! I love the showing you have here!! "every dog may have it's day" but they must bury the bones!! A very nice line here! I really enjoyed this poem, a little different than your usual isn't it?! Awesome Work!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/8/2012 8:48:00 PM

What a wonderful vision- love it, Brenda : )