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Seijaku Contest by Silent One ~ August 15, 2024

Seijaku

Life is not always filled with cloying contentment.
There are taunting trials and things I'd rather not do.
Those tedious tasks that steal my smiles and my time,
but not the joy of life's most endearing moments 
found within the confines of my happy home.

It's impossible to leave all my worries outside, 
nor can I hide from them each time I enter through
the front door, but my home seems to cradle me
inside its welcoming walls. Each room comforts me
with familiarity, offering safety and solace from storms
of both the physical and emotional kind.

I am at peace in the serenity I find surrounding me,
even when I hear voices in another room, I know they
are my loved ones. My family's laughter assures me
that all is right in my world. There may be furniture
that needs dusting, or floors that have been scuffed,
but memories made in these haven halls are treasured.
Conflicts and controversies, struggles and squabbles 
taking place in the world remain outside my refuge.

When my workday is done, I seek my family hearth,
the warmth within its sheltering roof, making it the safe
stronghold that I claim as my citadel.  Trepidations
drift away when I walk into my garden and find seclusion 
waiting there for me. I find peace and consummate
placidity in the sound of the koi pond's waterfall. 
There are no horns blasting with impatience, only a bed of
colorful impatiens blooming in profusion beneath the 
sweet scent of white magnolia blooms that soothe
my weary mind, blocking out stress and anxiousness.

I feel as if I'm in an innocuous world inside my fortress gate. 
Protected from the chaotic cacophony of worldly woes.
Standing at an open window as night falls, I enjoy the song 
of a nightingale as a myriad of stars surround a full moon.
At the end of the day, these moments are appreciated 
for the assuasive effects that I need in my life. 

This is the anodyne I seek.  This is my home.
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Seijaku" write again. Have a great day/weekend writing away.......................
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:56 AM
'sweet scent of white magnolia blooms that soothe my weary mind, blocking out stress and anxiousness.' I loved the night songstress singing to moon and stars. congratulations dear poet.
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much for pointing out something you particularly liked about this one, thriveni.
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:18 AM
This is so well written and flows with wisdom and acceptance of how nothing is perfect yet we somehow find our way to attaining serenity and comfort. One that has a home where love is present is a lucky one. I loved the most “ Standing at an open window as night falls, I enjoy the song of a nightingale as a myriad of stars surround a full moon.” Beautiful! As a star gazer, i resonated with that and natures songs do have a way of healing and soothing us. Brilliant write, congrats on your win
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:32 AM
I really do enjoy those I mentioned in my lines. They are special moments inside my safe haven... my home. Thanks for the congrats and fine thoughts, Ink.
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:34 AM
I like the light alliterations and message in your poem.. we all need a calm home.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Lane Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Thank you for considering my lines for a placement in your contest.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 12:03 PM
A beautiful and comforting poem Lin, we all like our personal little havens, where we can shut out, and switch off from the world at large, a very well penned therapeutic piece here, one in which this reader enjoyed today, cheers David
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:35 PM
Writing, even of the most tragic kind, has been therapeutic for me many times, David. I've lived in three different homes and in two apartments in my life. Only one never felt like a haven, but I'm content where I am now. My only wish is for a garden space, but houseplants will have to do. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 9:49 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderfully write. As I read, I can feel each line. If only we could leave all our worries outside, that would be for me. Have a very blessed day.......................
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 10:32 PM
thanks so very much for your wonderful review, Paula. It certainly would be grand if we could lock out our troubles with the turn of a key.
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