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Seijaku Contest by Silent One ~ August 15, 2024

Life is not always filled with cloying contentment. There are taunting trials and things I'd rather not do. Those tedious tasks that steal my smiles and my time, but not the joy of life's most endearing moments found within the confines of my happy home. It's impossible to leave all my worries outside, nor can I hide from them each time I enter through the front door, but my home seems to cradle me inside its welcoming walls. Each room comforts me with familiarity, offering safety and solace from storms of both the physical and emotional kind. I am at peace in the serenity I find surrounding me, even when I hear voices in another room, I know they are my loved ones. My family's laughter assures me that all is right in my world. There may be furniture that needs dusting, or floors that have been scuffed, but memories made in these haven halls are treasured. Conflicts and controversies, struggles and squabbles taking place in the world remain outside my refuge. When my workday is done, I seek my family hearth, the warmth within its sheltering roof, making it the safe stronghold that I claim as my citadel. Trepidations drift away when I walk into my garden and find seclusion waiting there for me. I find peace and consummate placidity in the sound of the koi pond's waterfall. There are no horns blasting with impatience, only a bed of colorful impatiens blooming in profusion beneath the sweet scent of white magnolia blooms that soothe my weary mind, blocking out stress and anxiousness. I feel as if I'm in an innocuous world inside my fortress gate. Protected from the chaotic cacophony of worldly woes. Standing at an open window as night falls, I enjoy the song of a nightingale as a myriad of stars surround a full moon. At the end of the day, these moments are appreciated for the assuasive effects that I need in my life. This is the anodyne I seek. This is my home.

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Date: 8/24/2024 10:31:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Seijaku" write again. Have a great day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:56:00 AM
'sweet scent of white magnolia blooms that soothe my weary mind, blocking out stress and anxiousness.' I loved the night songstress singing to moon and stars. congratulations dear poet.
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for pointing out something you particularly liked about this one, thriveni.
Date: 8/24/2024 7:18:00 AM
This is so well written and flows with wisdom and acceptance of how nothing is perfect yet we somehow find our way to attaining serenity and comfort. One that has a home where love is present is a lucky one. I loved the most “ Standing at an open window as night falls, I enjoy the song of a nightingale as a myriad of stars surround a full moon.” Beautiful! As a star gazer, i resonated with that and natures songs do have a way of healing and soothing us. Brilliant write, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:32:00 AM
I really do enjoy those I mentioned in my lines. They are special moments inside my safe haven... my home. Thanks for the congrats and fine thoughts, Ink.
Date: 8/24/2024 4:34:00 AM
I like the light alliterations and message in your poem.. we all need a calm home.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:31:00 AM
Thank you for considering my lines for a placement in your contest.
Date: 8/16/2024 12:03:00 PM
A beautiful and comforting poem Lin, we all like our personal little havens, where we can shut out, and switch off from the world at large, a very well penned therapeutic piece here, one in which this reader enjoyed today, cheers David
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Date: 8/16/2024 10:35:00 PM
Writing, even of the most tragic kind, has been therapeutic for me many times, David. I've lived in three different homes and in two apartments in my life. Only one never felt like a haven, but I'm content where I am now. My only wish is for a garden space, but houseplants will have to do. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you.
Date: 8/15/2024 9:49:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderfully write. As I read, I can feel each line. If only we could leave all our worries outside, that would be for me. Have a very blessed day.......................
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Date: 8/16/2024 10:32:00 PM
thanks so very much for your wonderful review, Paula. It certainly would be grand if we could lock out our troubles with the turn of a key.

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