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Seijaku

Seijaku – 8-1-24 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Seijaku Serenity abides with tranquility Abiding in beauty And deep respirations of satisfaction Ready Alert Overlooking tangled mazes of overlapping obligations Labyrinths of lists - And atonal demands. As the sun streaks past engorged calendars In whirly-gigs of heavy-handed chaos The shade of tranquility Stretches out Looming across the face of serendipity With the breath of the rose The whisper of sapphire jewels Born from oceanic bowers. In the shadows waits The gift of each rubric solved Pushing aside the tyranny of over committed - In dawns, and Aurora’s ballet in neon slippers, The spirit dialates, As moonlight drips from feathery boughs, Healed from epidemics of minutes Swallowed by a never resting pendulum. The poet arises, even blooms, Ignoring the cataracts of frail dreams When hurried footsteps and clouded hearts Still race infected by chaotic delirium Tripping over beauty’s outstretched boughs To see – to notice - To embrace Lavender, gently waiting, with amazement.

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Date: 8/24/2024 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Seijaku" write. Your last stanza was a Great Ending.... Have a great day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:42:00 AM
'Aurora’s ballet in neon slippers' how amazing! only you could see it dear poet. I bet no poet ever said this about aurora! beautiful. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:03:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win dear samszy! Happy to see you in winners list! Sending you light always
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:30:00 AM
Some really beautiful imagery here especially in the third stanza.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:22:00 PM
Dear samzy! Such a beautiful poem! Really! The way youv painted imagery throughout this stunning poem truly blew me away and left me in awe! And made my heart fee so much! I really loved “ breath of the rose” “ Aurora’s ballet in neon slippers, The spirit dialates, As moonlight drips from feathery bough” mystical and moving how youv captured the essence of seijaku in such eloquence! “ The poet arises, even blooms, Ignoring the cataracts of frail dreams“ such a unique way of saying how poet rises and blooms letting go of darkness. Love this! Best wishes! Youve done an excellent job
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Date: 8/9/2024 9:18:00 PM
Your poem emanates so much of serenity and makes the mind embrace all beauty awaiting. Amid chaos, 'the shade of tranquility stretches out'. I greatly enjoyed 'Aurora's ballet in neon slippers.' What a unique and arresting way of describing the coming of dawn! Reading this poem early in the morning, I got so much rejuvenated. This is indeed a marvel of poetic creation, dear Sam. Into my FAVE
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Date: 8/7/2024 1:31:00 AM
Hi Sam, This is absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the flow of your seijaku. Assuming it's Japanese? will check it out and now shall fav it. Have a blessed day Sam.
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Date: 8/6/2024 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful write!
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Date: 8/5/2024 3:38:00 PM
the glory of nature can surely become a bridge fir self rejuvenation...lovely images. lovely work, sam
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Date: 8/4/2024 12:42:00 PM
This form was made just for you, Sam. I honestly don't think I can pull it off, especially with rhyme off the table. Gorgeous this is , just as Paige said
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Date: 8/1/2024 7:15:00 PM
GORGEOUS! "Tripping over beauty’s outstretched boughs To see – to notice - To embrace Lavender, gently waiting, with amazement. " this I love <3
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