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contest Seijaku...sponsor Silent One

The soft lit airy openness of my home with its simple uncluttered spaces and various gardens brings me a deep relaxing breath of peace and allows me to withstand the storms of life in quiet understanding whether sitting in an open space where I can inhale the serenity of my existence or finding peace while cutting my roses with the stillness of my mind as a companion giving me pause to feel each breeze that washes over the blooms in my gardens where I find a calm majesty of motion inviting my soul to welcome the purity of my senses as they reach tranquility allowing me to release my Earthly bonds freeing my soul into peaceful submission and the beautiful paradise of silence where I fill my being with a serene solemn calm

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Date: 8/24/2024 7:58:00 AM
'finding peace while cutting my roses/ pause to feel each breeze/freeing my soul into peaceful submission/...' so well written dear poet. congratulations. happy writing.
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations dear frederick on your win, i loved this one alot
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:40:00 AM
I could feel the calmness in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/28/2024 12:59:00 PM
This is so tender and delicate how youv woven words throughout in such a touching and descriptive manner dear frederick. The way youv painted imagery is so soulful and beautiful. Every line in this is just stunning and impeccable! I think silent one will love this! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes always
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/28/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, my poetic friend for your kind words

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