Seijaku

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Written on July 28, 2024

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fragile wings, feelings breath dusty dreams continue to abide on the trembling, consoling, complexity arising above the asphalt’s grief, life in echoes of a light, falling gentle against the backdrop of heat, rain, wind and seascape memories, satin robins, wrens bathed in whispers of laughter, soothing away the moments before a heavy sun, broken into lessons, who abide on the mourning dawn’s quiet touch, healing, hastening through the moments, isolated like a dandelion seed, blowing across the still, clear dreams of a prayer, faded into the shocking heat, summer’s dream, haunting, bleeding with the hope of fighting back from the night, where the stars glisten, glowing like a diamond’s quivering sparkle, reflecting all the moments, chilling moments pale against the moon, where laughing silence shadows the darkness, still as the breath, rich as the orchid, swaying, dancing, hypnotizing leaning into the moments, melancholic trembling, risking the quiet to free the light, simple, wispy as the feather speaks of a story untold, a story meant for the emptiness a page of desolation, void, futile lasting, even amid the bustle of epiphanies, realized by the autumn’s mood, the sunset, too soon, on a narrow truth.

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Date: 8/25/2024 1:14:00 PM
Such vivid imagery and comforting words that also gently nudge the reader to a better direction. You're writings are always surreal and beautiful... your mind full of amazing peace. Xo
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Date: 8/24/2024 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Seijaku" write. What A Great/Pretty Picture....  Have a great day/weekend writing away.....................
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:47:00 AM
'robins, wrens bathed in whispers of laughter/leaning into the moments, melancholic trembling, risking the quiet...' exquisite weave dear poet. you write in such calmness, one can feel. congratulations.
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:32:00 AM
Beautiful selection of words that seem really personal to you... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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