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Seguidilla 1

Midnight in droplet puddles
murky cobble stone
after a crisp whiz of rain,
men sound left alone.
Portal kept silence
into a magical dew
of faint world's absence.


9/14/2017

Contest:  'SEGUIDILLA' Contest 
Sponsored By:	nette onclaud


1. Midnight, not a sound from the pavement.
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Joanna Daniel Date: 9/22/2017 7:02:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win with this lovely write:) Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/22/2017 12:11:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Eve. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/21/2017 7:27:00 PM It seems that everyone so far I've read who did that picture came up with some marvelous imagery. Way to go, Eve! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/21/2017 4:43:00 PM Congrats Eve on your second place win! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/21/2017 3:03:00 PM Eve, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful write !! Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/21/2017 2:57:00 PM Congratulations Eve! :) Login to Reply

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Nette Onclaud Date: 9/21/2017 1:40:00 PM eve, you raised the bar with this astounding seguidilla---atmospheric and right down my alley!... best congrats as i thank you for participating... huggs Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 9/16/2017 7:13:00 AM A nice midnight scene, loved the line 'murky cobble stone'. Good luck in the contest Eve...Maria Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 9/15/2017 12:36:00 PM Enjoyed the rhythm in the poem, wonderful choice of words and lovely imagery, Eve ... Good Night ... Login to Reply

Pipping Stars Date: 9/15/2017 9:57:00 AM very tricky ... we really enjoy this type of read ... leaves the mind searching endless riddles ... ... "men sound" "left alone" "portal kept silent" ... whisper ing merely assumed... street lamp lights in a hollow pool... cobblestone drawn mosture marooned... drown ing in breaths breathed by fools... centering lines on golden spools... marking shadows... as fiery fuels ...?... your words n pic inspire ... huh ... Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2017 12:20:00 PM Thank you, Timothy, you are a breath of fresh air :)

Silent One Date: 9/15/2017 8:55:00 AM Nice imagery and use of words... Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2017 12:21:00 PM Thank you ,silent one, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/15/2017 6:26:00 AM Lovely depiction of silent pavement and the quiet of the midnight--best wishes for a win, Eve! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2017 12:22:00 PM Thank you ,Vijay, r, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Russell Sivey Date: 9/15/2017 4:17:00 AM Wow Eve, this is spectacular, a grandiose write my friend! I definitely enjoyed reading your masterful poem this morning, you have delighted me by your wondrous skill at writing this rare form! I enjoyed writing this form, how about you? What a fabulous piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2017 12:23:00 PM Thank you , Russell, love your inspirational compliment you are so kind. Hugs Eve ~ `*

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2017 2:07:00 AM - Lovely written, Eve :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2017 12:24:00 PM Thank you , Sunshine, . Hugs Eve ~ `*