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Segovia and Madrid

SEGOVIA AND MADRID I land on this wee planet of Segovia. Has blood-red skies, like Transylvania. Knees start knocking, afraid to answer. The room grows suddenly cold..brrr. Suddenly a star, happenstance a ship appears and I hop in it, as I flip off the fanged nightmare I leave behind. We head for Madrid - the bulls are more kind. I sing a song: ~ Between Segovia and Madrid Two wondrous destinations I live to tell the tale of both ~ ~ Segovia’s blood thirsty Oh, the torture’s never ending The sky’s on fire It’s the living dead ~ ~ But Madrid, oh you’ll live It’ll chase you down What a thrill ~ ~ You’re full of bull if you think You can outrun Count Dracula Come drink in life O Madrid ~ 7/18/2019 H W Longfellow Inspired Poetry Contest Sponsor - Julia Ward

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Date: 7/18/2019 7:38:00 PM
Wonderful piece my friend. Have a great day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2019 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 7/18/2019 5:48:00 PM
I have no knowledge of Longfellow whatsoever, but I can say from my gut that this certainly is an amazing read, Kim. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 7/18/2019 1:13:00 PM
Hi Kim, You were inspired to write a good piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis!
Date: 7/18/2019 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 7/18/2019 7:37:00 AM
Imaginative writing at its best dearest, Kim! Excellently written!
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Date: 7/18/2019 7:30:00 AM
Henry certainly inspired you Kim, well written and good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2019 7:34:00 AM
Just having fun with the contest! :)

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