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Seething

The still water of the northern swamp shone like anthracite coal lending a rainbow hue to the mirrored reflections of maiden hair fern and skunk cabbage. Strangely grotesque maples rooted wearily beneath in the hidden depths of blue-blackness. The summer sky above hang topsey turvey Its sunlight sparkling like fireflies upon the still water. The leaden air caskets the first layer of rampant growth, misting moss, masking mushrooms, where slick green frogs hide beneath pink pond lilies. The heat bakes the red clay bank cracks gape like the toothless open mouth of a baby. Layers of hot air create mirages of fright as the swamp seethes in delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/5/2011 9:45:00 AM
Wow! This is fantastic.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/6/2011 9:27:00 AM
how kind are YOU! ;)
Date: 6/26/2011 3:12:00 PM
I LOVE this kind of poetry, it SEETHES with description, DEbs. thanks for all your comments today. I am feeling really drowsy. What do you bet, I will go off now for a nap and Joe,who has been napping all along, will wake right up when I go upstairs. hahaha. That's always how it works with "opposites." luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:48:00 AM
Where is this pretty scene? The clay and moss kinda make me think of Georgia, or even right here in good Ole' South Cackalacky! The Seething reminds me of a song called "Seether" that happened to be in my head for 2 days last week. But that's ok because it's a good song and this is a GREAT POEM> MAN!
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:46:00 AM
Amazing how you can take nature and turn it into a scary adventure movie!! Would be a hit in the theaters with the teen-set!! (But such excellent poetry, as always...!!!!) ps....many thanks for the placement, Debbie...I am late in thanking you, been away for a bit...but I'm pleased you liked Humpty's shenanigans!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:08:00 AM
Quite a talented write, a very visual piece.
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Date: 6/20/2011 2:24:00 AM
a rage so underplayed yet deeply felt... genius, debs.. thanks for enjoying my "alice" piece.. was worth all the crearive juices squeezed! oh my..:) huggs to you! :) nette
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