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Written September 18, 2025

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Seems Like Yesterday, Mystic

When my mind wanders to the night we met, I see you standing, trembling heart, a silent grace Murmuring softly, the story I’ll never forget Your love fell over me, my spirit wrapped in your embrace Beyond the salty sea, beyond the cobalt skies I see the gentlest prayer, spoken by a heart in need My soul is relieved to see you, look into your eyes Knowing that I’ll always believe we will succeed When my life feels lost in the wind, blowing away The music playing soft, gently revealing my praise I remember the joy that comes, joy that will stay Love that lingers and never leaves, love to amaze I know you don’t understand how much you mean to me You don’t realize how your heart touched my own, How much I love you – how my soul will forever be A part of you, a piece of the life, oh, how we’ve grown! When I forget to praise the One who wrote our story I remember, He is alive inside and offering hope So that I never need to fear, He’s coming in full glory Revealing the wonder that tells my spirit I can cope I remember seeing you that first night together When love first brought us the wonder of forever We can make it through any storm, any weather Sure that He will keep us, reminding we’re a whosoever Whosoever believes, He promises to save from hell Saving us from the darkness that comes to kill Promising us there is hope that we will forever be well Assured of heaven above – this is surely God’s will I won’t forget the joy we’ve known, the love That comes from all we’ve shared, our life As we overcome and reach our home above Because we know the One who ends all strife Let me ask you, my beloved husband, my friend Will you make sure to keep praying for healing So that there is a hope that this cancer is not the end And, most of all, that we’ll always share this feeling… A feeling that came when we first met A feeling that will last, beyond disease A feeling that He gave, - I’ll not forget This feeling we share as we fall to our knees!
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Date: 9/18/2025 12:53:00 PM
This is a beautiful and deeply moving poem. It's a powerful expression of enduring love and unwavering faith. The way you connect your personal bond to a shared spiritual strength is truly inspiring.
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Date: 9/18/2025 9:06:00 AM
Nicely written rhyme Enjoyed this The love you share with your husband and God Kevin
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Date: 9/18/2025 5:37:00 AM
Lovely poem that tells how deep is your bond to your partner and to your creator. Definitely He will keep you together to love unto eternity. All the Best, dear Gina.
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