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Seeking New Mobility

As setting sun trails off behind a peak, I lie in utter lone tranquility here tethered to my earthly home. I seek a sundering. . . A new mobility. I focus on the hidden, inner me, forgetting awkward limbs and hands and toes. My body must entirely flaccid be, so placidly I keep a still repose that soul might elsewhere go past mountain tops. Then suddenly, I feel my spirit pitch. It spins; I’m on the brink. . . and then it stops! I think this failure’s more than just a glitch. I open up my eyes and see afar, now twinkling with amusement, night’s first star. (true story about my one attempt long ago for an OBE.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/6/2020 6:05:00 PM
You have had a very interesting life! I liked the proximity of flaccid and placid.
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:24:00 PM
I've had a couple of what I believe to have been obe's, they came unexpectedly though, it's true if you try to force it, you get to the brink, something seems to halt it.. Excellent poem on this subect Andrea I must say. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/7/2013 3:41:00 PM
Mine are OME. Good write.
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Date: 5/12/2012 10:03:00 AM
Yeah Andrea,may be senryu:)
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:33:00 PM
Back in the 60's, they liked to go. On trips like this where the mind would flow. Out to the nth degree of thought. Always hoping to never get caught. Ilicit stimuli and such, now no one seems to want that crutch.
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Date: 4/21/2012 3:04:00 PM
nice one dear
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Date: 4/20/2012 3:54:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea. I have one more of yours to read and that's it for today. Been on the computer for 5 hours today trying to catch up on lots of reading. Would help if i typed faster. love phyl
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Date: 4/20/2012 1:46:00 PM
Great meditation. "and then it stops." I've had the experience and seen "afar." Love, daver
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Date: 4/20/2012 6:01:00 AM
Harry cracked me up with his witty comments below...you ARE WORTH HIS LIBRARY FEE and more,,,you became night's first star?....WOW, how amazing...it's bc of the very blessed imagination that you have that God allowed you to take a peak into this realm...you wrote of it beautifully. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/19/2012 4:01:00 AM
my favourite form of poetry, and again from you, a wonderful example of its flowing grace, and sincerity. worth my library fee just to read this. Oh! as for obe, the nearest i came to it is via google earth. harry
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Date: 4/18/2012 12:47:00 PM
lol, i've never tried, but i doubt if i would get far either, andrea. many congrats on your wins
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:53:00 AM
Glad to see your write on this experience Andrea, i think you are outside the normal anyway without leaving the earth; take care Joe.)
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Date: 4/18/2012 7:38:00 AM
Fantastic one just read. Sometimes past becomes present in memory with a fickle of seconds. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/18/2012 7:20:00 AM
Interesting work..Soup me and explain more about it..Enjoyed reading it..Sara...Thank you for taking time to stop by and review my work and comment..
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Date: 4/18/2012 2:48:00 AM
Nice read dear poetess.
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Date: 4/17/2012 10:53:00 PM
you are in the bliss of solitude Andrea..,.great poem...Thanks for visiting and sharing ... love...Joseph
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Date: 4/17/2012 7:17:00 PM
Stellar, A very descriptive write about a spiritual journey Andrea. I love the last two lines, they capture the essence of the theme in succinct fashion. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/17/2012 2:32:00 PM
Andrea they say that to have an OBE (outer body experience, for Michelle) you either have to be near death or completely naked, as to have nothing that can link you to the present moment, I have not tried either...YET...David
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Date: 4/17/2012 2:26:00 PM
simply out-of- this- world experience, andie... wonderful visuals done in good form!... whoooty!..:) huggs
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Date: 4/17/2012 10:43:00 AM
Oh, thank you for your kind comments, Andrea.:) I'm even more happy, cause it prompts me to come and read more of your outstanding writes!:)) This piece is so deep and vibrant. Though I don't know what an "OBE" is, I do see that it was something that has sparked and flared up an outstanding write! Man, I feel so ignorant and fuddy duddy at times, with words.:( Regardless, as usual, I'm blown away by the "spirit pitch" and beauty of your writes! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:24:00 AM
wonderful sonnet. I enjoyed your inner search and almost obe. love the last line - cute personification of the star to end this piece positively, with a smile :)
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Date: 4/17/2012 7:50:00 AM
You are really good at the Sonnet. I always enjoy these more when penned by You!! Good work!.:JP}
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:55:00 PM
Wonderfully penned Sonnet by you Andrea.very nicely expressed feelings in this poem.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:53:00 PM
Yess!!
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