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Seeking Jeannie's Vision

Many things in life are left undone for fear of asking or lacking a veritable fact, in doing so our wish gathers dust, and we still remain that child pulling the toy wagon.... but wait, I heard of Jeannie's bottle so tall and sleek, which grants wishes to all seeking her vision! Would we sit back and ponder defeat, not try harder to glimpse into dreams after when we're awaken? I may waffle and laugh as a satirical jester, but my frisky intentions cannot be hindered by a mere obstacle, and as a pugnacious and fierce warrior... this battle I must win and seize Jeannie's bottle! I will make many wishes and as I see them materialize, I willl keep rubbing it until I lose the desire to fantasize!

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Date: 8/4/2010 7:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrew
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Andrew in Catie Lindsey's contest "I Dream of Jeanie". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:17:00 PM
congratulations, Andrew. Where are you anyway these days? Sure miss you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:55:00 AM
Conagratulations Andrew on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Catie's contest with some wonderful wishes.. so now enjoy another big win..my friend.. happy Sunday.. with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:13:00 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful entry
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:23:00 PM
A unique write on the subject. I appreciate it. Good luck in the contest, Andrew
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