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Seeking eternity

Just another boring day. The snowflakes drift away. My question is sink or swim? My light starts to dim. I will keep my tunes on blast. They are moving quick like my past. Sometimes I come to question. Am I making a good impression? The memories linger in my head. They are as soft as the silk on my bed. The bright lights are flashing. The battles in my mind are clashing.

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Date: 4/23/2025 3:15:00 PM
Thanks for Sharing this poem. I been there and felt it. Very good I liked It.
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Date: 4/3/2025 2:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/29/2025 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing. Nice rhyming.
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