Robert Gorelick Poet Quatrain

SEEK SHELTER

Look about at what inhumanity hath wrought
In vain we seek solace in a storming deluge
Have good intentions really been for naught?
In desperate straits we seek our refuge

Wraths ancient and new like thunder rage
Tearing the shelter we seek asunder
At a loss for words, both fool and sage
Silently assess humanity's blunder

No more do I seek shelter in brick or stone
For hatred tears all things apart
So here I stand unafraid and alone
Having faith in the light of a brand new start

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I Am Anaya December 19, 2023 at 12:52 PM Brilliant work, passionate as well. To evaluate our true nature, ability, or quality of, a learning experience. Beautiful poetry, Robert.

Bill Baker December 10, 2023 at 9:46 AM I especially like the line, "For hatred tears all things apart." There's wisdom in these words, Robert, thanks for the mindfulness of your poetry, my friend. Bill Robert Gorelick December 13, 2023 at 8:23 AM Thank you, Bill for your kind and perceptive comment. All the best, Robert

Christina Bowring December 2, 2023 at 11:24 PM Such a well written quatrain Robert and powerful too. You have expressed your feelings very well and it is a thought provoking piece. I love the strength of the last two lines especially. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you a peaceful Sunday. :) Robert Gorelick December 4, 2023 at 8:33 AM I have found that its best not putting too much faith in human nature, even the best and the brightest among us. Better search for a power beyond our earthly knowledge or sagacity. Glad you enjoyed, thank you for your encouraging words. Best regards, Robert

Silent One December 2, 2023 at 10:51 AM Great poem and great message Robert.. Robert Gorelick December 2, 2023 at 11:26 AM Thank you. Perhaps a message that doesn't carry the optimism many would prefer, but I'm compelled to be true to my feelings. Robert