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SEEK SHELTER

Look about at what inhumanity hath wrought In vain we seek solace in a storming deluge Have good intentions really been for naught? In desperate straits we seek our refuge Wraths ancient and new like thunder rage Tearing the shelter we seek asunder At a loss for words, both fool and sage Silently assess humanity's blunder No more do I seek shelter in brick or stone For hatred tears all things apart So here I stand unafraid and alone Having faith in the light of a brand new start

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I Am Anaya

Date: 12/19/2023 12:52:00 PM

Brilliant work, passionate as well. To evaluate our true nature, ability, or quality of, a learning experience. Beautiful poetry, Robert.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/10/2023 9:46:00 AM

I especially like the line, "For hatred tears all things apart." There's wisdom in these words, Robert, thanks for the mindfulness of your poetry, my friend. Bill

Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/13/2023 8:23:00 AM

Thank you, Bill for your kind and perceptive comment. All the best, Robert

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/2/2023 11:24:00 PM

Such a well written quatrain Robert and powerful too. You have expressed your feelings very well and it is a thought provoking piece. I love the strength of the last two lines especially. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you a peaceful Sunday. :)

Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/4/2023 8:33:00 AM

I have found that its best not putting too much faith in human nature, even the best and the brightest among us. Better search for a power beyond our earthly knowledge or sagacity. Glad you enjoyed, thank you for your encouraging words. Best regards, Robert

Silent One

Date: 12/2/2023 10:51:00 AM

Great poem and great message Robert..

Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/2/2023 11:26:00 AM

Thank you. Perhaps a message that doesn't carry the optimism many would prefer, but I'm compelled to be true to my feelings. Robert