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November. 26. 2023
Pick a Title.Vol.40. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh
~ Placed Second~

 

Will you come, Oh merciful Lord? To touch and heal my bleeding heart. When I sob in suppressed agony, Ease my heart so torn apart. I entreat with a voice distressed, To the one who always feels my pain. Heal my hurt and purge my heart, Of the sins which tacitly remain. I stagger under the weight of life, No one around to ease my grief. I see you as my anchor and fort, You beckon me with avowal of relief. But a chasm separates you and me. My legs grow weary as I try to walk. My body ails with every forward step. Carry me as impediments, my path block. I see my world growing dark. Grant me light that I will not grope. Lend your hand in my tight rope walk. That if fallen, I can spring back and hop. I know, the opulence of this world, Can never ever fill my weary heart. It is in the sweetness of Thy love, That I find my life’s whole comfort. In the trials of life, in you I seek my shelter. I wish nothing else but to be wholly thine Lord, I wait here keeping my door open, Will you come to make the light in me shine?

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Date: 12/17/2023 9:49:00 PM
A blessed rendering, Valsa. The ill and the inflictions, that affect our physical bodies, and how it affects our minds and spirit, as well. Both are tangible entities, when it pains physically or when it pains, mentally, suffering is the same. Be constant in prayer, free from sin, and know The Word, not just read it. My compliments on your win in Edwards Contest, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/17/2023 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations in your placement in the contest dear poet..
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Date: 12/16/2023 7:10:00 PM
"Lord, I wait here keeping my door open, Will you come to make the light in me shine?" - Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/16/2023 7:09:00 PM
"Lord, I wait here keeping my door open, Will you come to make the light in me shine?" - Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/16/2023 7:09:00 PM
"Lord, I wait here keeping my door open, Will you come to make the light in me shine?" - Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/16/2023 7:23:00 AM
I remember reading this sweet valsa! Your poetry deserves all the accolades, you are one of the finest poets i read here that leaves me in awe, pleased to see you getting the appreciation you deserve, congratulations
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Date: 12/16/2023 6:06:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win with this lovely poem, Dear Valsa.
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Date: 12/16/2023 5:55:00 AM
I am moved by this heartfelt plea. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2023 4:23:00 AM
Such a fantastic piece, Valsa. I really love the format of your poem as well Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/16/2023 5:45:00 AM
You are a noble soul, dear Edward. Taking part in your contest is always a pleasure for me. Thanks a lot!
Date: 11/27/2023 1:13:00 PM
Its when we are in need and seek His tender love, that we show ultimate faith. Your sad beseeching in this poem is testament to the unfaltering faith you have. A truly wonderous poem dear Valsa With great admiration from SV
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Date: 11/26/2023 3:21:00 PM
a stunning creation, Valsa! Your rhymes were smooth and your images subtle but power. These lines spoke to me: I stagger under the weight of life, No one around to ease my grief. You are my anchor and my fort, I see you, beckoning me with assurance of relief. God is our reassurance and our hope, the source we turn to when we need hope and guidance. This is truly a masterpiece! have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 11/26/2023 10:39:00 AM
When you ask for help from God, you will always be protected. Your poem, Valsa, is so smooth and very well crafted. The love and comfort you want are also looking for you, just like the bright and warm sun. We all need a safe place to go when life gets hard.
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Date: 11/26/2023 10:38:00 AM
A beautiful expression of faith and how in time of trouble your strength lies in God, your saviour... Life is full of trails and tribulations, we always need someone to lean on in such difficult times.. so we seek shelter against the storm... God is always there.. A truly wonderful take on the theme... blessings.. sending your light
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Date: 11/26/2023 9:41:00 AM
Well penned poem seeking shelter in God.
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Date: 11/26/2023 9:10:00 AM
Awwn this is so sincere and so beautiful how you’ve expressed dear valsa, your love for God, and faith is palpable throughout , flows so seamlessly too, in the past few days iv read various poems written by you and im in awe of the way you nail every theme and subject in sheer eloquence, this is no exception, i felt so much as i read the lines about how body ails and still you seek for light and shelter, it shows hope, and that really touched me deeply. Moving take on this prompt, goodluck
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Date: 11/26/2023 6:42:00 AM
We all need that safe harbour in the storms that plague us in life's journey. Well written verse Valsa and good luck in the contest. Tom
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