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Seeing You

I feel you running scared on the fringes wondering whether or not I've left debating with yourself, is she hiding?" inside myself I look out seeing you

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George Aul

Date: 3/19/2011 10:01:00 AM

A deep write..........George

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 10:37:00 AM

Glad you're having fun in Boston, Annalise! If you do go on board the Constitution, you may hear the sounds of the spirits of old sailors there. I thought I did. Enjoy your trip!! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 10:41:00 PM

Annalise, how are you?,, hope you'll enjoy your day of St. Patty's day... i sure will... as a matter of fact.. im starting it off here on the soup... i find your poem with deep emotions.. very wow! im impressed how your poem,, is about one self,,, take care,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/16/2011 3:39:00 AM

Great, Annalise, you found yourself! Well written!....Gert:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 5:46:00 PM

Deep and intense Annalise.. feeling the emotion in these lines.. the hiding and the questioning is boldly evident luv.. wonderful form ..never tried this myself.. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2011 3:06:00 PM

When we look inside ourselves, we never know what we'll find, Annalise. In this case, you actually "found yourself" as many people often try to do. Be careful though -- too much self-reflection can make us lose sight of the things that are truly valuable in life. Compelling poem! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2011 12:50:00 PM

Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara