Seeing You

I
feel you
running scared
on the fringes
wondering whether or not I've left
debating with yourself, is she hiding?"
inside myself
I look out
seeing
you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/19/2011 10:01:00 AM
A deep write..........George
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Date: 3/18/2011 10:37:00 AM
Glad you're having fun in Boston, Annalise! If you do go on board the Constitution, you may hear the sounds of the spirits of old sailors there. I thought I did. Enjoy your trip!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 10:41:00 PM
Annalise, how are you?,, hope you'll enjoy your day of St. Patty's day... i sure will... as a matter of fact.. im starting it off here on the soup... i find your poem with deep emotions.. very wow! im impressed how your poem,, is about one self,,, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 3/16/2011 3:39:00 AM
Great, Annalise, you found yourself! Well written!....Gert:)
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:46:00 PM
Deep and intense Annalise.. feeling the emotion in these lines.. the hiding and the questioning is boldly evident luv.. wonderful form ..never tried this myself.. luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 3:06:00 PM
When we look inside ourselves, we never know what we'll find, Annalise. In this case, you actually "found yourself" as many people often try to do. Be careful though -- too much self-reflection can make us lose sight of the things that are truly valuable in life. Compelling poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 12:50:00 PM
Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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